NY NY (new york new york) Final Season Continuing from Eps 139-147.

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    Nancy Blake Show
    On Air Cam Show
    Manhattan
    New York City


    Host Nancy Blake (played by Serinda Swan), is hosting Live coverage in front of a live audience and to millions across the country. Her Guests are Sharon Taylor, left, Deloris King, Centre, and Matt Graison, right. Deloris is holding missing posters of her mother, Charlotte King, who unbeknown to her had been murdered by the Francis Bay Killer, orchestrated by Bethany, weeks earlier.

    Nancy Blake looks to the Camera, as she sits left Deloris in Camera view.

    "Welcome to the Nancy Blake show. Hi I'm Nancy Blake and here with me today is Deloris King, who runs a coffee shop, in the small town of Francis Bay on the far east coast of Long Island. Am I correct?"

    Blake puts the microphone to Deloris mouth.


    "Uh, yeah, but......."- Deloris

    "That's very interesting, must get chilly this time of year, but of course you have plenty of hot drinks to warm yourself up with huh, keep the colds at bay. Get it at Bay? Ha haha haha."

    "Uh....Uh yeah. Listen I'm looking for my mother......"

    "I hope you're not nervous, which is perfectly normal, because this is my fifth show and I'm still nervous. In fact is there anyone here who is not nervous, Sharon? Matt?"

    Blake puts the microphone back to Deloris lips.


    "Listen I'm in search of my mother, her name is Charlotte King, she disappeared around a month and half ago......"

    Blake interrupts her.


    "This wonderful. Because I love coffee. My favourite is Latte. It's bad I know because of the caffeine. But, the energy surge just sends chills down my spine. Can't beat a Latte or Cappuccino, with a Cream Pie."

    Blake feels momentarily awkward and coughs, before placing the Microphone back to Deloris.


    "Listen, I'm trying to find my mother, her name is Charlotte King and........"

    Blake interrupts again.


    "This is wonderful, Uh......how did it come about that you became to run your own coffee shop?."

    "Look, I'm trying......"

    "Do you recommend this line of work. Do you make a lot of money doing this?"

    "Her name is Charlotte King, she's forty three......"

    "This is a little off the subject, but that is a beautiful bracelet, can I ask you where you got that?"

    "She's forty three years old, I'm trying to find her."

    "Great, lets say you do find her. What would you say to her, what would be the first thing that would pop into your head?"

    "She's Forty Three years old, her name is Charlotte King...."

    "Thank you so much Deloris."......Blake turns to guest Sharon. "Hello, there Sharon, now you are an interesting character. Now you are twenty one and you have slept with a hundred men over seventy years old."

    "And they've me so rich!!"- Sharon

    "Who can blame you?"- Blake

    A seething Deloris snatches the microphone away from Blakes hand.


    "Yeah, rich bitch can my kiss my boring ass. Listen I'm trying my mother OK. Her name is Charlotte King, she was last seen in Francis Bay Long Island, on January 12th, and if you have any information....."

    "Thank you, Deloris....- Blake.

    "No f*** off Blake, and if you have any information to this wonderful lady, I'd appreciate it if you contact the Kings Café of Francis Bay, I have a five thousand dollar reward to offer. Hey, asshole, leave the camera on me, I'll knee your balls right to the roof of your mouth. Charlotte King, Kings café, Francis Bay, Long Island. Now you can talk about, skanky Sharon and her geriatric perverts and whatever, excuse me."

    "Thank you, that was Deloris King."

    Deloris walks off set. Blake has the microphone and points it to Matt Graison's lips



    "Now where were we. Oh yes, you have slept with over a hundred men and they are all over seventy."- Blake.

    "Actually no, that was Sharon."- Matt.

    "Oh yes.......Blake looks to the camera awkwardly. ......."We'll be right back after this commercial break."

    Cue Commercial Break music.



     
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    Awesome update, you have so many fascinating characters, and storylines in your amazing story. I really hope you update again soon.
     
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    :hugs:Thank You for reading Jessie. Will be updating soon.
     
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    Final 8 Episodes Teasers/Spoilers.



    Episode 140: Mind Impact

    H:
    "I know all about it. "
    R: "What are you talking about Daddy?"
    H: "You even actually believe that I am, but the truth is I'm not aren't I?"
    R: "......Not what?"
    H: "I think it's about time we got everything off our chest, Abigail.......Don't you?"


    Episode 141: Murder Most Horrid


    O: "Then who killed the Wilsons?"
    Fed: "Beats the shit out of me. The evidence is fucked up. With what we've got, it could take a long, long, long time before we find out who did it. "
    O: "Have you found Jeff Wilson, their eldest son?"
    Fed: "His alibi checked out. He wouldn't have any reason to murder his own parents. And as far we're concerned his youngest sibling is clean as a whistle. Whoever committed this horrible slaughter, had an incredible knack of covering their tracks.


    Episode 142: Fathers son. Mothers Daughter.


    B: "WHAT THE FUUUUCCCCCKK!!"
    J: Oh shit.
    B: What the f*** is your problem? That had all my livelihood in that truck and now it's in the fuckin drink, because you can't drive to save your ass!
    J: Sorry man, the clutch must have slipped.
    B: Yeah so did my fuckin truck, you dumbass!
    J: Look I was just doing this guy a favour.
    B: Oh good for you. Well I hope that favour was worth your while, because it proved to be fuckin useless now!
    J: Sorry.
    B: Sorry won't be bring the goddamn thing back now will it. Jesus Christ man your amateur. I've trod in shits with more brains!



    Episode 143: Dressed To Kill.

    R: Linda it's you. You're alive.
    B: Yes my love. My soul is yours to take. C'mon lets hit the shower.


    B: Plot thickens.


    J: Get outta there! Behind you!!



    Episode 144: The Rise And Odyssey Of Mrs Wilson.


    T: Who are you?
    E.L. I'm your only hope and vice versa.
    T: Hope for what?
    E.L. Vengeance and Redemption.
    T: You know who I am?"
    E.L. How could I not know. I loved you, but you loved him instead. And I'm here to take you to him......eventually.


    Episode 145: Penultimate Showdown.


    C: She really doesn't know does she Harry?
    T: I don't know what your you're talking about you crazy Bitch.
    C: Now that's no way to talk to the mother of your child.
    H: ................what are you talking about?
    T: She nuts.
    C: Need a second opinion Harry. Ask your psychiatrist.
    T: Harry what is she getting at?
    C: No matter how much he will deny himself, he can't deny he's the true father of the child, you mothered in my absence.

    Episode 146: Series Finale Part I. Reunion


    D.H. I know who did it. And why William Mcquire was murdered.
    D.M. What do you mean?
    D.H. How could have been so stupid it's been a cover up along. It was a cover up back in '79' and these recent killings have been a cover up to stop the truth from finally unveiling.
    D.M. Melanie what are you saying.
    D.H: Greg Mcquire is not our suspect. Just in the wrong place at the wrong time. But I know who did it and who's been committing the recent murders.

    Episode 147: Series Final Part II. Revelations.


    T: Where do we go from here?
    H: That's up to you. Do you love me?
    T: I've always loved you.... and always will.....but
    H: But what?
    T: Everything's changed.
    H: ................Yeah. No thanks to Gloria Lang. If it hadn't been for that Bitch. I wouldn't have remembered. But the one thing I never forgot was always you. What a waste of fuckin time.






     
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    CENTRAL PARK
    ICE SKATING RINK
    HARRY P.OV.


    Harry and Rebecca are sat on a bench eating a burger, opposite each other.

    Rebecca what is it that you're scared for me to find out? The visions are becoming more occurring too. Did these ever happen before I lost my memory, or are they part of a new phase in my life? I wish the whole truth could just open up completely, just for some closure. Looks like I may have to learn the hard way.

    "I've had a certain memory pop up, where I'm cradling a dying woman in my arms. Felt like a very long time ago."

    Rebecca- "I'm not sure on that one."


    "Or maybe you're worried how I might take the truth, if I were to find out. Is it the sort of memory that nobody may want me to find out?"

    "It is painful. I don't think it would be my place to tell you."


    "But, you may know whom I'm referring to right?"

    "You really wanna know?"


    "I can take it."

    "It was probably your mother, my grandmother.......your parents were murdered twenty four years ago, shortly after you left High School."


    Holy shit, I shouldn't have asked. That is too much more than I can handle, with all the other stuff.




    I'm sorry, you wanted me to be honest."


    "Don't blame yourself, I'm OK......wow. Why? I mean who would do such an evil thing. Who killed them?"

    "Nobody knows. Whoever did it, is still free today. For something to go unsolved for so long, it must have had a major cover up."


    "You mean the police, the Fed's, they just gave up? No justice has been done."

    "Before you lost your memory, you told me, that the evidence the police had was so inconclusive, it would have taken a long, long, long, long, long time before they could even tell what the circumstances were, let alone make an arrest."


    "Sounds like my parents murder was premeditated. If it wasn't, a cover up like this wouldn't have lasted this long."

    "Sorry Dad, but the only people that knew of your parents death, was your parents and you found them."


    "Before we return home to Long Island, I want you to take me to the archives."

    "Daddy c'mon I don't want you to stress yourself out more, than you already have."


    "Please, if we get home late, I won't let you take the blame, I promise.....I'm just desperate."

    "I'll give you an hour no more."
     
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    I love your story, I'm caught up. I hope you update again soon. You are one of my favourite writers. ❤️
     
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    Elaina's Handbag Cam
    Southern Manhattan



    Elaina's voice can be heard, as she sits impatiently in her car.


    "C'mon copper hurry and pass off." - Elaina.

    Anxious tapping on the steering wheel can be heard. Few moments pass and she has lost all patience.


    "That's it, can't wait anymore. We all have to take risks."

    Elaina's picks up her handbag and appears to run across the street and into an apartment complex, possibly Emma's previous apartment once again.


    We then cut to an elevator sequence, ascending upwards and Elaina steps out and walks over to Emma's front door and listens in carefully. Elaina can hear heavy breathing and slowly enters. Continuing into the apartment kitchen, blood can be seen splattered on the floor and then Emma is seen sat over Officer Ryland's dead body. The handbag is dropped to the ground with the CAM still facing Emma and a kitchen knife beside her. Emma is drugged to the eyeballs.

    "Jesus Christ Emma what have you done?"- Elaina

    Elaina stands alongside the body.


    "He made me do it. He broke in."- Emma.

    "Emma this is a police officer, his name is Ryland.

    "He's a police off.......Oh shit."

    "Emma this is gonna look bad. You have put everything into a major predicament."

    "Major predicaments have been happening to me for a while El, might as well put the icing on the cake. Anyway I guess you had had better call 911 emergency and send me in. Might as well confess my sins and tell them everything."

    "Emma what have you done? WHAT HAVE YOU FUCKIN DONE!!" - Elaina.

    "What have I done? What about what people have done to me? Ok I admit both myself and Chris did the same to each other and sleep with the same sex, but on top of all that, the girl that I fell in love with, fell in love with a vampire psychopath, concealing her murders. My now deceased, legal father, bought me off my drug addict biological father and he's dead. And to top it all off I've got nothing left, except a dead policeman in my apartment, who I thought was an intruder."

    ERIC LANCE COMPUTER SURVEILLANCE
    SECRET, UNKNOWN LOCATION

    Lance can see the mess Emma has gotten herself into


    "My, my, my what a mess."- Eric

    ( back to conversation between Elaina and Emma).


    "What am I gonna do now? Ryland was gonna ask you about Hugo and Beagle, two cops that have been harassing me and have gone missing." - Elaina.

    "What you think I killed them too?" - Emma

    "No, this has to do with the investigation into what's being going on in Francis Bay"

    " Oh wouldn't have anything to do with Rebecca's dirty secret would it or Bethany being serial killer? Might as well just get it out in the open on the way down to the police station. I'll help you put the body in the trunk."

    Elaina starts to cry


    "Don't cry. It's my fuckin mess."- Emma

    "You don't understand." - Elaina

    Emma gets to her feet over a bloodied body.


    "I thought we were friends."

    "I wanted to be and I don't know maybe, this............."

    "Elaina I just murdered a blue fuckin badge. I can deal with it, call e'm I won't hold it against you. You never know I might get better sex in the showers."

    "Emma! You're off your F*****g head!!"

    Emma is then seen grabbing a glass of water.


    "Elaina are you trying to say what I think you about to say? You don't have to cover for me. As much as I love you, there's no way out of this. If I get everything off my chest now, Bethany will go straight to hell and Rebecca, well, identity theft and aiding abetting a murderer, ouch. You Elaina will be saving Harry from years of torture and bullshit."

    (Eric voice is then heard).


    "Oh my Holy God. If Emma talks, then Carla will act with deadly vengeance on the World, and Bethany again will be prepared. We could yet have a worse case scenario on our hands. Right location phone book. "


    Elaina's handbag Cam.
    Emma's apartment telephone rings.

    "Who is that calling?" - Elaina

    "Probably someone new about to move into an apartment, now haunted by a dead policeman."- Emma

    Emma is about to head to the phone, when Elaina cuts her off


    "Let me answer it, you're in no fit state. And mind the dead body."

    Eric's computer surveillance.
    Elaina's Bag Cam
    Elaina's voice can be heard and there is an echo, in between the cam and the phone line.

    "Elaina what the hell is going on? This wasn't supposed to happen." - Eric

    "It wasn't my fault, this cop is harassing me and Emma's be caught up in it in her pretty little neck." - Elaina whispers.


    "We're not supposed to get everything out in the open, until we've located Carla and that Cosmos necklace is out of Bethany's grasp. We could literately end up back to square one again and then we're f***ed . "

    "It was an accident, Emma didn't mean to. She's lost everything. The people she loves, she's lost her mind. She's needs help."

    "I'm glad to hear that. You're about to commit your first federal crime."

    "Oh Christ, you want me to hide the body?"


    Cam remains on Emma who shivers at the thought of a bludgeoned body in her kitchen. She then looks at Elaina's handbag that's open and spots a bright red light in her bag. Emma moves over to the bag, as Elaina remains on the phone to Lance and looks inside. Between the outside and inside of the bag, is cam and Emma has found it.

    "And to top it all off, Emma's found the cam."- Eric

    "Oh shit."

    The Handbag is then seen being picked up by Emma and walked across the room with heavy footsteps.


    "You fony Bitch are you spying on me?" - Emma

    "Emma listen to me it's not what you think."- Elaina

    "Funny, everyone say's that."

    "It's for my protection."

    "Do I look like I just flew over the cuckoos nest?"

    "It's hard to say really."

    "You don't care about me do you, you're just the same as all of them. Lance, Bethany, Rebecca, Chris! You're just a bunch of Fuckin Bastards!"

    "Emma please."

    Partially from Cam view Emma head butts Elaina and her nose starts to bleed. Emma drops Elaina's bag and runs off somewhere and footsteps can be heard coming back. Elaina can be heard panicking and out of the nowhere footsteps can be heard slowly stomping back loudly.


    "So what's another persons blood on my hands. After all, I'm being exactly what Linda Perry was. A person that Rebecca could LOVE!!"

    Screams can be heard and out of the blue, Emma is seen running across cam with a kitchen knife. A scuffle can be heard. Eric is wondering what's happening.


    "Holy shit. There' nothing I can do. C'mon Elaina, C'mon. You fail now. Don't fail us all." - Eric.

    Smashing and crashing can be heard, as well as the screaming. Then Emma is punched across screen and the knife falls onto the cam. Elaina kicks away the knife and shoves Emma away. It then seems Emma's footsteps are heard running away. Elaina picks up the handbag and looks into the cam. Shaken and a bit bloodied, but luckily to be alive.


    "I'm OK, Emma's ran out the apartment. She's ruined, totally. There's no way back for her. I can't do nothing to help her now. We gotta do something Eric...... Help me."



     
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    Briefly shown all downstairs room, empty.


    Francis Bay Bank

    Bethany is seen interacting with customers.




    HARRY P.O.V.
    ARCHIVES
    LIBRARY
    NYC, MANHATTAN

    I wonder if I'm doing the right thing. What if what I discover becomes too painful? What if the information I get is not fully clear to me or vague? What if I don't wanna know? But, if I'm desperate....wait...What about Rebecca? She loves me and apart from me being here looking at history that could be daunting and haunting, Rebecca is hiding something too. But, that also......what if I don't wanna know that either. Ah, shit, we're here now, might as well face the music. I know everyone will tell me, that something's are best left in the past and the future is all that matters. But, the visions, they are obviously are trying to tell me something. In my dreams and now recently, when I make contact. I see a woman, possibly my first wife, visions, of happiness and.....horror. Oh shit we're. Don't back out Harry, don't throw the f*****g towel in. Could bring to light more than you realize.

    "You ready for this?" - Rebecca


    "Yeah......yeah."

    "Look are you sure you're up to this, I mean this is so soon?"


    "Rebecca I need closure. I think so suddenly in my amnesia, I'm not so patient."

    "What about Bethany?"


    "I won't say anything and you mustn't either."

    "That's what I mean, maybe........no you're right. You should do this at you're own free will."


    "I know it's intense, but I can't hide behind closed doors forever."

    "Nobody said forever, but you've are getting over a kidnapping ordeal."


    "I'm certain there will be plenty more ordeals in the future."

    "Nothing traumatic I hope."


    "OK, lets see what's Ghosts are hiding in the closet. "

    "Now, then if we click on here and here...right then what's first?"


    HARRY P.O.V.
    Alright what happened to my parents?

    "What year was my parents.........when did they pass away. Will it be on these newspapers, I mean you said it happened in Hex- Ville upstate in my hometown?"

    "Possibly. Well.....from what I recall, it happened on July 4th 1979. Lets take a look shall we.



    Wilson Household Cams
    Francis Bay
    Still house is not occupied at this time

    Francis Bay Bank
    Bethany is seen with her coat on exiting the bank


    HARRY P.O.V.
    NYC ARCHIVES
    MANHATTAN
    Oh Christ here we are. Oh my God that's them (Harry sees a photo of his parents).

    "SUBURBAN COUPLE BRUTALLY MURDERED"
    Upstate massacre shocks town of Hex-Ville

    "Daddy, Daddy are you alright?"- Rebecca

    "That's my mother and father?"

    "Yeah, that's them.


    They look so happy. Looked like decent people. How could somebody destroy such happy lives?

     

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