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  1. cardiff1984

    cardiff1984 Soap Chat Active Member

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    Do you still remember


    .........The Future?







    Lightening Strikes Clocktower - Parts I, II + III


    Amplifier overolads - Part I


    Time Travel Experiment - Part I


    Doc sends Marty back to the future - Parts I, II + III


    "
    You gotta come back with me." - Doc

    "Where?"- Marty

    "Back to the future." - Doc

    Delorean heads to the future - Part I or II (depends on Jennifer actress)




    2015 Hill Valley advanced future - Part II


    1955 - Delorean is struck by Lightening, knocking Marty to the floor - Part II


    "I know you did send me back to the future, but I'm back. I'm back from the future." - Marty.



    "Great Scott." - Doc



    Doc faints. - Part II / III

    Horses pulling the Delorean through a Desert / Canyon - Part III


    "
    Where you going now? Back to the future?" -Marty

    "Nope. Already been there." -Doc


    The Time Train disappears into the space time continuum. - Part III




    BLANK SCREEN



    Officials at the Pacific Nuclear Research Facility have denied the rumor that a case of missing Plutonium was infact stolen from their volt two weeks ago. A Libyan Terrorist Group had claimed responsiblity for the alleged theft...." - News Report from Oct 25th 1985 -Part I.



    BLANK SCREEN
    Doc opening the Plutonium Case


    "They wanted me to build them a bomb. So I took their Plutonium and in turn gave them a shoddy bomb case full of used pinball machine parts." -Doc - Part I.



    BLANK SCREEN


    Marty in 2015 opens Doc's letter.


    "
    I'm sorry Marty, but the future has changed -Doc (O.S.)



    Doc arrives on Monday October 28th 1985 and offers the Libyans money to stop a Nuclear Bomb being detonated in Los Angeles.





    "
    I had no choice." - Doc (O.S.)



    Doc being shot by the Libyans at Twin Pines Mall. Marty crying out.






    "
    Can't believe Doc's dealings with the Libyans, was a chain reaction, that could possibly destroy everything I exprienced on that October weekend in 1985.



    Marty's photograph unfading- Part I


    The Almanac - Part II


    Marty punching Buford Tannen - Part III




    "
    No future Techonology." - Doc



    Flying cars - Part II


    "
    No advanced artificial terror system defences." - Doc



    Computer systems and Satellites, September 11th attacks depicted by a newspaper - Jennifers funeral 2001



    "
    No Stem Cell research." - Doc



    Mcfly Stem Cell Foundation



    "
    No Future..... This is heavy." - Marty





    1985 Doc arrives in 2015



    "
    What year is this?" - Doc 1985.



    "
    This Doc is the year 2015. Looks like we have a paradox." - Marty



    "
    Great Scott." - Doc 1985



    Marty tries to manipulate Old Biff to steal the Almanac. Biff has a heart attack.



    Doc and Clara in 1885 - Part III



    Jules and Verne - Part III



    "If Biff dies, you may not have a future in the past Doc." - Marty



    "
    Then lets go back." - Doc 1985.



    Marty's daughter Linda ,named after her late aunt, appears



    "
    Wait. Got room for one more." - Linda.





    THE PASTS FATE NOW LIES IN THE FUTURE.



    "
    Where are we? When are we?" - Linda



    "
    October 28th 1985!" - Doc



    Doc tries to infiltrate Goldie Wilson's quarters undetected.



    Lorraine Baines Mcfly surprises Marty.


    "
    Hi, Calvin." - Marty



    "Calvin?" - Linda



    Lorraine teases Marty in 1955 - Part I



    BUT AS ALWAYS THEY'LL ALL BE BACK



    Doc 1985 is arrested.

    Lorraine attempts to escape the police in pursuit, with her future granddaughter and son as passengers.





    *Tell me Doctor, where are we going this time?*



    Temporal Displacement Occurs and the Mcfly's are hauled back to 1925.



    *Is this the fifties or 1999?*



    Marty, Linda and Lorraine look to their surroundings.


    "Where the hell are we?" - Linda



    "When the hell are we?" - Marty



    *All I wanted to do, wa splay my guitar and sing.*

    In the Brown farm, Doc's sons are shown.


    "See anything Familiar?" - Jules



    "Another Delorean?" - Marty






    *So take me away, I don't mind, but you better promise I'll be back in time.*



    "Mom, mom is that you?" - Lorraine.



    "Back in good 'ole 1925" - Stella.



    "1925?" - Lorraine



    Lorraine meets her teenaged mother


    "You're my M-You're my M- Lorraine



    *I'll get back in time.*



    Linda stood next to the Clocktower in 1925



    In the floozy bar, Linda is being perstered by Irving Tannen



    AND KEEPING IT IN THE FUTURE IS THE FAMILY TRAITS



    "Hey babe what's your name?" - Irving



    "Parton...Dolly Parton." - Linda



    "Nice to meet you Doll." - Irving



    Back To The Future Theme


    "Dad died a long time ago."- Jules



    Doc's grave is shown


    "If Dad isn't sent back to 1885, there will be a paradox and we won't exist" -Jules.



    " It's pay back time." - Buford.



    Gun fire ensues on a beer heist.



    Marty, Lorraine and William Mcfly are tied up by Irving and his gang members


    "Tannen has got Dad and Grandma." - Linda



    "Let's get e'm back" - Verne



    A garage is set alight, with Marty, William and Lorraine trapped inside


    Gangsters chase Marty, who escapes in a Delorean



    Jules and Verne fight Gangsters, with the aid of Linda


    Lorraine knocks out Buford






    MICHAEL J FOX
    OK everyone lets Jazz



    CHRISTOPHER LLOYD
    1:21 Gigawatts!



    "
    Seriously?" - Police Officer



    THOMAS WILSON
    Eastwood!



    LEA THOMPSON
    Nobody calls my Son 'Yellow.'



    ACTOR TO PLAY IRVING TANNEN
    Hey Mcfly!



    (Actress to play Marty's daughter)
    *I guess you guys ain't ready for that yet...but your Grandkids are gonna love it.*

    (introducing - Actors to play Jules and Verne)
    Great Scott!
    How in Sir Issac Newton are we gonna fix this?"



    The time machine disappears leaving a pair of fire trails behind



    The time train.



    STEVEN SPIELBERG PRESENTS


    A ROBERT ZEMECKIS FILM





    "
    We gotta get back?" - Marty



    "
    Where?" - Linda and Lorraine together



    "
    Back To The Future."





    BACK TO THE FUTURE......PART 4


    DESTINY DEPENDS ON IT!



    COMING SOON>>>>







































     
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    STEVEN SPIELBERG


    PRESENTS​





    A


    ROBERT ZEMECKIS


    FILM





    Sunday


    October 27th


    1985


    11:30 am.







    EXT HILLDALE- EASTWOOD RAVINE - 1985

    Marty Mcfly and Jennifer Parker both 17, make their way slowly towards

    the EASTWOOD RAVINE RAILROAD TRACKS, where the wreckage of the

    Delorean Time Machine lays. They both walk onto the track lines and scour the

    remains.



    JENNIFER


    You're right, there's not much left.​



    MARTY


    Doc's never coming back.​



    Marty spots a ripped up picture of Doc from 1885, standing next to the

    construction of the clocktower. Marty picks it up and looks at the picture

    feeling hurt, that he may never see Doc again.



    MARTY


    I'm sure gonna miss him Jen.​



    Suddenly the railroad alarms signal and the barriers begin to lower down.

    Both Marty and Jennifer look up and down the tracks to see if there are oncoming

    trains. Nothing insight. This confuses them both.



    MARTY


    What the hell?​



    Suddenly there are THREE SUPER SONIC BOOMS, knocking both Marty and Jennifer off their feet.

    A TIME TRAIN then appears in a 1880's style. The Time Vehicle comes to a complete stop. A hatch opens

    and it's Doctor Emmett Brown, now 75, wearing a top hat and suit. He looks down to Marty and Jennifer. Marty is

    overwhelmed.



    MARTY


    Doc?!



    DOC


    Marty!​



    Marty and Jennifer get to their feet and move towards the train.



    MARTY


    Doc!​



    DOC


    Marty, it runs on steam.



    Doc opens the doors and some stairs lower. Clara then appears beside dock in an 1880's

    purple outfit.



    DOC


    Meet the family. Clara you know.​



    CLARA


    Hi Marty.​



    MARTY


    Ma'am​



    DOC


    These are out boys.​



    A young boy about 9 appears in front of Doc.



    DOC


    Jules​



    Then another boy appears about 7 appears in front of Doc



    DOC


    And Verne. Boys this is Marty and Jennifer.​



    The boys wave to the two teens.



    MARTY


    Doc I thought I'd never see you again.​



    DOC:


    You can't keep a good scientist down. After all I had to come back for Einstein, well I didn't want you to be worried about me.​



    Einstein sits beside Verne and the boy pats him. Clara hands Doc a parcel.



    DOC


    Oh, I brought you a little souvenior​



    Marty heads closer towards Doc as Jennifer follows by his side. Doc hands him the parcel and

    Marty unwraps it. It reveals Marty and Doc standing next to the construction of the Clocktower in 1885.

    It's reads "To Marty Partner In Time September 5th 1885." Marty shows his appreciation by giving Doc a

    hand shake.



    MARTY


    It's great Doc, thanks.​



    Jennifer shows Doc a blank piece of paper.



    JENNIFER


    Doctor Brown, I brought this note back from the future and now it's erased.​



    DOC


    Of course it's erased.​



    Jennifer looks to Marty momentarily confused then back to Doc



    JENNIFER


    But, what does that mean?​



    DOC


    It means your future, hasn't been written yet, knowone's has. You future is whatever you make it. So make it a good one, both of ya.​



    Both Marty and Jennifer smile to one another, as they are finally assurred of what may lie ahead for them.

    Marty smiles to Doc, putting his arm around Jennifer.



    MARTY


    We will Doc​



    DOC


    Stand back. Alright boys buckle up.​



    Doc steps back into the Time Train, as does Clara, Jules, Verne and Einstein. Doc closes the doors up. Doc pops his head back

    out of the hatch one more time to bid farewell.



    MARTY


    Hey Doc? Where you going now? Back To The Future?



    DOC


    Nope. Already been there.​



    Doc signals Marty and Jennifer, good luck, as Marty and Jennifer wave goodbye. Doc gives a nod, before closing the hatch. The Time train then lifts above the ground and spins ninety degrees towards the Ravine and picks up speeds Marty and Jennifer give one more wave. The Time vehicle then makes one more ninety degree turn. The Time train then HEADS TOWARDS THE CAMERA, picking up to 88 miles per hour and disappears into the SPACE TIME CONTINUUM.
     
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    BLANK SCREEN





    Monday


    October 28th


    1985





    appears on the screen.





    INT. UNDERGROUND TUNNEL





    EXT. HILL VALLEY TELEGRAPH - CLOSE UP





    HEADLINE READS "AUTHORITIES UNSURE ON MALL SHOOTOUT" 'Terrorists captured.'

    It also shows a still of the minivan tipped over in the broken fotofox stand.​





    The camera pans away from the article.





    EXT. DETONATOR.


    A detonator with a switches and a red light are shown. The camera then pans to six men.





    EXT. LIBYAN NATIONALISTS. Armed with machine guns.




    EXT. HASSAM MUSKIN. The terrorist leader appears to be looking at the article with a meaningful expression of hatred and looking pretty vengeful. He thumps the table with anger and turns to his accomplices. He speaks his nations language.​


    (SUBTITLES ARE SHOWN)








    HASSAM MUSKIN


    We will not tolerate the Americans no more.


    They have interfered in our business for too long.


    If they think they have all the control, well they can think again.


    They will meet our demands. We will trade as we want. We will not have our freedom of speech ignored


    and we will prevail in the release of our comrades in Hill Valley.


    (Hassam then holds up a picture of Doc Brown.


    He walks around showing his associates the picture)


    This man betrayed us. Wherever he is, he will be partly resonsible for what we may achieve today


    (Hassam points to the detonator)


    This is a new step. Thanks to our new associate, we have a chance to get our word out. Even if


    it means sacrificing ourselves to prove we are not afraid.




    EXT. RADIO UNIT. A call out from local authorities on ground level speak.​




    Hassam heads to the radio and picks up the reciever. He pushes a button.​





    HASSAM


    Well, have you met our demands?




    EXT. LOS ANGELES.​


    A construction site is sealed off by authorities and agents. Bystanders are seen and heard panicking.




    EXT. HELICOPTERS. Police helicopters swarm the area. Agents Sanders is talking to Hassam via radio link and attempting to negotiate with the Libyans.​





    SANDERS


    We are trying our best. It may take time.





    HASSAM


    Time is of essence Agent. All I have to do is flip one switch and two million people will pay


    for your defiance against our country.





    SANDERS


    That's a very serious threat. Can we at least come to some dort of compromise here?





    HASSAM


    Compromise? The only compromise I have is for two of my nations brothers to be released fom custody,


    unless this Hill Valley scientist sacrifices himself for the sake of your people.





    SANDERS


    You do realize what your saying is barbaric?





    HASSAM


    MYSELF AND MY COMRADES ARE WILLING TO SACRIFICE OURSELVES UNLESS OUR DEMANDS ARE MET!


    (Hassam looks at his watch)


    I will give you ten seconds - then after that - I guess negotiating is over. If Doc Brown is hearing this. He should have sacrificed himself at that Mall.


    Ten....





    Agent Sanders panics.





    SANDERS


    Cmon lets not be rational here.





    HASSAM


    Nine





    Eight





    Seven





    SANDERS


    Oh shit. He's gonna do it.





    HASSAM


    Running out of time Agent. Six.


    Five





    Four





    Authorities give themselves the sign of the cross. One officer rushes over to Sanders and hit him in the back.





    OFFICER


    For God's sakes, negotiate.





    SANDERS


    He's bluffing.





    HASSAM


    Three





    Everyone in LA holds their breath.





    Hassam puts his finger near the flip switch.





    HASSAM


    TWO!




    SUDDENLY THREE SUPER SONIC BOOMS ARE HEARD, ALONG WITH THREE FLASHES OF LIGHT!​




    EXT. UNDERGROUND TUNNEL. DMC DELOREAN TIME MACHINE.​

    Hassam is caught off guard the appearance of a Delorean appearing out of thin air and it screeches to a halt. Five of the Libyan Nationalists point their weapons at the time vehicle. The Gullwing door flips open.​




    EXT. 'DOC' EMMETT BROWN.​

    Doc Brown now aged 85, appears in a black suit and tie and a suit case. He sees the terrorists with their guns ready to fire.​




    Hassam Muskin steps forward astonished to see Doc Brown within a few feet of them. One of the the Libyans walks to the side of their leader.​





    LIBYAN


    (Subtitles)


    He looks older than before.





    HASSAM


    (subtitles)


    A disguise of course.




    Doc holds his arms up in the air, with the case in hand.​





    DOC


    OK, boys lets not be too hasty.




    Hassam paces himself towards Doc, looking anxious.​





    HASSAM


    You betrayed us. That Plutonium we gave you was too build that bomb.





    DOC


    It's seems that it didn't take you long to get another erran boy to build you a real one. Tell me, who was the person or persons who negotiated in your new threat.





    HASSAM


    Sorry Doctor Brown, but that's confidential.


    Now, will you sacrifice yourself for these millions


    or will you kindly beg to have my comrades you somehow


    outwitted on Saturday be released from jail? We know you


    had a friend with you.





    DOC


    Not on your nelly.





    HASSAM


    Careful Doctor Brown a bullet proof vest won't


    save you this time. I assure the next range of bullets


    will not miss. In case your skull is thick - Silly me it


    is - thick and dumb.





    DOC


    How about we negotiate without anyone dying?





    HASSAM


    And how do you suppose we do that?


    (Hassam looks to the Delorean)


    What is that?





    DOC


    Uh?





    HASSAM


    Don't tell me- something military?

    Doc hesitates and throws the suitcase on the table and opens it. It's full of cash. Hassam eyes light up. He touches both ends of the case.​





    HASSAM


    Well, well, well Doctor Brown. You do know how to try andmake


    up for your mistakes.





    DOC


    I had hope I had - Theres ten million dollars


    in that case - in exchange for the detonator


    of course.




    Hassam turns to his associate Terrorists. They just stare confused by recent events and await their leaders decision. Hassam turns back to Doc.​





    HASSAM


    Well I guess the two we sent on their mission will have stay


    in jail. Their failure will be our gain - You have a deal Doctor Brown.








    EXT. DELOREAN. DOC BROWN.

    Doc places the detonator in the trunk and then gets into the time machine with rand is about to close the gullwing door, when Hassam intercepts.​





    HASSAM


    Your co-operationhas reprieved you from certain death.


    Maybe we can share some hospitality in the future.




    Doc nervously smiles and nods. Doc closes the Gullwing door. The time machine backs up and faces down the tunnel. Hassams associate calls him over.​





    LIBYAN


    (subtitles)


    Hey boss, take a look at this.




    Hassam is handed a hundred dollar note and licks his finger and it smeers ink on the note. The Libyans have been given fake cash.​





    HASSAM


    It fakes. THE MONEYS FAKE!


    HE'S BETRAYED US AGAIN!




    (Hassam turns and sees the Delorean speeding off down the tunnel)​


    GOOD RIDDANCE TO YOU DOC BROWN!




    Hassam and the other terrorists open fire, as Doc gets the Delorean up to Eighty eight miles per hour. Doc smiles to himself.​





    DOC


    Mission accomplished.


    (to himself)




    The Fluxcipacitor lights up and Delorean heads off into the Space Time Continuum.​





    BACK TO THE FUTURE PART IV LOGO APPEARS


    OPENING CREDITS


    "BACK IN TIME" BY HUEY LEWIS AND THE NEWS PLAYS WITH SCENES FROM THE TRILOGY PLAYING INTO THE OPENING
    .





























     
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    Tuesday


    October 20


    2015





    APPEARS ON THE SCREEN.







    INT. MARTY MCFLY HOME.


    NIGHT. THUNDER STORM.





    CAMERA PANS AROUND A DARK ROOM.


    Marty, Jennifer and their daughter, Linda are depicted in a photograph.


    A sole picture of Jennifer is shown. Also seen is the photograph of Marty


    and Doc stood next to the Clock face in 1885.​




    THE CAMERA THEN MOVES INTO A HALLWAY, WHICH PANS TO THE FRONT DOOR.


    The front door opens with an UMBRELLA appearing, then lowered.​




    INT. MARTY MCFLY.​




    Marty Mcfly, aged 47, enters, soaked in a suite and tie. He shakes his Umbrella and enters his home and


    shuts the door behind him.​








    MARTY


    Hello anybody home.




    No reply. The house is silent.





    MARTY


    I guess not.


    (to himself)







    He chucks his Umbrella into the corner and walks into the Kitchen


    , where he begins to make a Coffee. He is pretty much lonely and look catches a glimpse of his


    reflection in the kitchen window, as the flashes of Lightening become profuse. He pours his Coffee


    and leaves the Kitchen.​




    INT. LIVING ROOM.


    TV SET.​




    Marty flicks on the Television. Dr Phil is on the TV and it's topic


    involves an estranged Father Daughter relationship. Marty changes the channel


    to a science programme discussing the possibility of Time Travel. Marty seems drawn into


    show and then his cell phone rings. It says 'MOM' on the screen. He answers the call.​








    MARTY


    Hi Mom.





    LORRAINE (O.S.).


    Marty, what happened to you? We expected you three hours ago.





    MARTY.


    Shit I forgot. I've got caught up in so much work,..sorry.





    LORRAINE (O.S.).


    Linda is upset. She thinks you're disowning her.





    MARTY


    I'm not Mom. I understand why she wanted to live with you. But, things have been rough lately.





    LORRAINE


    Have you taken your medication?





    MARTY


    Yes I have. Look I'll make it up to her I promise. Can you put her on the phone?





    LORRAINE


    She's upset Marty..





    MARTY


    Mom, I don't want to go into debate, I just want to speak to my daughter.


    (anxiously)





    LORRAINE


    Give her time.





    MARTY


    Time? I wonder where time went.





    LORRAINE


    Son, you can't keep hiding behind yourself. We all know what you've been going through for so many years. Since your diagnosis and....what happened on that terrible day fourteen years ago. But we can't change it, except helping yourself and being there for your daughter.





    MARTY


    Then put her on the phone. Please Mom.





    LORRAINE


    We'll all sit down and discuss it when the time comes.





    MARTY


    There may not be a time, by the time tomorrow comes?!




    Marty slams down the reciever and then rushes to the kitchen, where he grabs a big bottle of Vodka and pours himself a glass. He hesitates, before smashing the glass against the wall and drops to the floor crying. He looks to the ceiling.​





    MARTY


    Why Doc? Why has everything changed? You promised - you promised everything would be fine. When you said 'Our future is whatever we make it.' Never wanted this....never wanted this.​
     
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    Wednesday


    October 21st


    2015


    8:24. a.m.







    INT. LORRAINE/GEORGE MCFLY RESIDENCE.


    LYONS ESTATE. HILL VALLEY.





    INT. LINDA MCFLY'S BEDROOM.​




    An ALARM CLOCK is shown.


    The time changes from 8:24 to 8:25.​

    The Song "KING UNDER YOUR CONTROL" by YEARS AND YEARS


    begins to play.​




    THE CAMERA PANS DOWN TO A YOUNG TEENAGER ABOUT


    17 YEARS OLD.





    INT. LINDA MCFLY.​

    Seventeen year old Linda Mcfly, has overslept and is in her casual clothes.


    She is awoken by the song playing on the radio. She looks up sleepy eyed .


    Her eyes widen, when she realizes she is twenty five minutes late for class.​





    LINDA


    Damn. I'm for School.




    "SHUT UP AND DANCE" BY WALK THE MOON BEGINS TO PLAY.




    EXT. LYONS ESTATE.


    Pouring Rain lashes down.​




    EXT. LINDA MCFLY. LYONS ESTATE.


    Linda is seen rushing out of her Grandmothers house and jumps into a


    pretty much run down PINK CONVERTABLE. She attempts to start the vehicle


    to no aveil. Linda starts to become frustrated and starts hitting the Steering Wheel.​








    LINDA


    Please. Please. Cmon. Argh!




    Linda headbutts the Steering Wheel and the Car starts up.





    LINDA


    Ha


    (to herself)




    The car is still a little jumpy as it rolls out of the drive and drives down the street.





    INT. LORRAINE BAINES MCFLY. MCFLY RESIDENCE.


    Lorraine, aged 77, pulls back the curtains in the kitchen and watches her


    Grand daughter head off down the street.​




    EXT. LYONS ESTATE ENTRANCE.


    Linda is seen driving out of the Estate.








    EXT. HILL VALLEY HIGH SCHOOL. HILL VALLEY.


    EXT. LINDA MCFLY.​




    Linda Mcfly arrives late for school. She jumps out of her car and grabs


    her wet books and rushes towards the front door of the School.





    EXT. CARLOS RICHMOND.


    Carlos Richmond rushes out the main door and intercepts his Girlfriend.​





    LINDA


    Carlo?





    CARLOS


    Linda don't go this way. Miss Strickland is


    looking for you. If you get caught it'll be for Tardy's in


    a row.




    INT. HILL VALLEY HIGH SCHOOL.


    CORRIDOR.





    INT. LINDA MCFLY. CARLOS RICHMOND.​

    Carlos makes sure the coast is clear.​





    CARLOS.


    Coast is clear.




    Carlos takes Linda's hand as they cautiously walk down the hall.​








    LINDA


    It's my own fault. I didn't set my Alarm Clock for 8:00 am.





    CARLOS


    Shit happens.





    LINDA


    Just had a lot going on. You know, with my Dad.




    INT. MRS STRICKLAND.


    The Headteacher appears from a seperate hallway intercepting,


    both Linda and Carlos.​








    STRICKLAND


    Your father has become bad influence on you Mcfly.


    Although his time keeping was a lot better than yours, I understand.




    Mrs Strickland takes out two pink tardy slips.​





    STRICKLAND


    Tardy for you Mr. Richmond.




    Mrs Strickland has Carlos a pink slip.​





    STRICKLAND


    And one for you Mcfly I believe that makes three in a row. Now, let


    me give you a nickel, of a bit of free advice young lady. Your personal problems


    are your personal problems, you leave them at home. If you want a future


    Mcfly, you gotta have the right attitude.





    LINDA


    Oh yes Ma'am.


    (sarcastically)




    Strickland stops Linda abruptly by grabbing her right arm​

    in annoyance.​





    STRICKLAND


    You got a real attitude problem Mcfly. You're a slacker.


    Your Grand father was a slacker too I believe, until he straightening


    himself out. Can't say I believe destiny will be the same for his Grand daughter.





    LINDA


    Thank you for your lecture Mrs Strickland. Can I go now?




    Mrs Strickland then eye balls Linda.​





    STRICKLAND


    You are getting too cocky for your own good Mcfly. Your just a future nobody


    hoping to live up to her once famous Writers grand fathers name and a father who


    threw his life comepletely down the drain. I can assure from now on, no Mcfly will amount to


    anything in the history of Hill Valley.





    LINDA


    Yeah, well, History is gonna change.






     
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    October 21st 2015


    08:55 a.m.










    EXT. HILL VALLEY TOWN SQUARE.





    It's still pouring with heavy Rain.​







    EXT. CLOCK TOWER COURTHOUSE.





    The CLOCK FACE is still stuck at 10:04 P.M.





    THE CAMERA PANS DOWN TO GROUND LEVEL.​




    EXT. MARTY MCFLY CAR.


    Marty is seen driving near the CAFE 80's, which is not as advanced as the Cafe


    depicted in Part II. The windscreen wipers are on full power.


    Marty's car phone is heard ringing. Marty can be heard answering the call.​








    MARTY (O.S.).


    Morning Mom.





    LORRAINE (O.S.).


    You OK?





    MARTY (O.S.).


    Well, I'm on my way to work in the pouring rain, but other than that


    everything is fine and dandy.





    LORRAINE (O.S.).


    Marty, about what we discussed last night -





    MARTY (O.S.).


    Mom, all I want is for Linda to be happy you know that


    (interrupting)





    LORRAINE (O.S.).


    Don't shut her out. She was late for class again this morning.







    INT. MARTY'S CAR.


    INT. MARTY MCFLY.​




    Marty Mcfly is heard speaking into his car phone which is on louder speak.​





    MARTY


    Guess she follow more after her father, than her Grand mother after all.





    LORRAINE (O.S.).


    What are you talking about?


    You were rarely late for class - if ever.




    Marty hesitates as he was referring to his experiences from his original


    timeline which occurred at the beginning of Part I.​





    MARTY


    Well, it maybe could have happened in another lifetime.





    LORRAINE (O.S.).


    Anyway, she can't go through the rest of her Senior year with personal


    hurt getting in the way. Linda is a bright young girl. I don't want


    her life's ambitions to be thrown away.





    MARTY


    Mom don't you think I know that?


    I mean cmon, I love her my baby girl. It's just -





    LORRAINE (O.S.).


    Marty. Jennifer is gone. We can't bring her back. I would have thought at some


    point in the last fifteen years, you could have been stronger.


    I realize your Parkinsons hasn't helped. But, please - don't shut us out.


    Let's all sit down and work things out.





    MARTY


    Sure Mom. We will.


    Look I'll call round later and we'll talk.


    Ar, this Goddamn rain.





    LORRAINE (O.S.).


    By the way, I have a letter here for you.





    MARTY


    For me?


    Who from?





    LORRAINE


    Doesn't say..


    A Western Union Guy delivered.


    Claims it's been in their possession for the last Hundred years.


    Oh hang on a second.


    On the back it says ..'A Friend In Time.'





    Marty eyes widen and he drops his jaw in shock and he slams


    the breaks on.




    EXT. CAR. RAIN.




    Marty's car comes to a shuddering halt. Cars behind can be heard honking their horns.​

    Marty sits silently, grasping the Steering Wheel tightly, staring out of the window, as the


    rain outside lashes down. He realizes who the letter is from.​




    INT. MARTY MCFLY.




    Marty knows it's Doc Emmett Brown who sent the letter.


    Lorraine waiting for a reply, calls out to her son.​





    LORRAINE (O.S.).


    Marty are you OK?


    Son?




    Marty catches his breath momentarily, hesitating to his mothers call.​





    MARTY


    I'll try to get out of work early.


    I'll be there.


    Love you Mom, buy.




    Marty tries to pull himself together. He hasn't seen or heard from his


    Time Travelling friend in almost thirty years. A car behind honks again


    at Marty flashing their car lights and Marty continues on his journey to


    work.​












     
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    INT. HILL VALLEY HIGH SCHOOL.





    A SCHOOL BELL CAN BEARD RINGING.





    INT. CANTEEN.


    INT. LINDA MCFLY.​




    It's Lunch time. Linda Mcfly is sat at the dinner table


    waiting for Carlo's are she starts eating her sandwiches, while


    studying at the same time.​




    THE CAMERA MOVES TO A CLOSE UP OF LINDA.





    A chair is then heard to be pulled up beside her. Linda assumes


    it's Carlo's and does not make eye contact straight away.​








    LINDA


    How was Biology Hot stuff?





    GRIFF TANNEN (O.S.).


    Not as good as it will be between you and I hot stuff.




    Linda jumps and turns.





    INT. GRIFF TANNEN. ZAP KYLE. DERK KYLE. WOLF BENEDICT.​




    Griff Tannen is sat beside Linda, with his cronies, the Kyle Twins, Zap and Derk.


    And Wolf 'Wallis' Benedict, who has a hairy facial complection and arms.


    Linda is caught off guard by the Gang and is feels very uncomfortable.​





    LINDA


    Oh it's you.





    GRIFF


    Expecting someone else Mcfly?





    LINDA


    Unfortunately for you yes.




    Griff moves his face a little closer to Linda's, who nervously attempts


    to move further away, but can't push herself. Griff has a scary smile.​





    GRIFF


    So how 'bout it?





    LINDA


    How about what?





    GRIFF


    You and me.





    LINDA


    In your dreams Griff.




    Linda tries to return to her studying, but Griff tries to intimidate her


    by closing her book. Linda freezes. Griff puts her arm around her shoulder.




    GRIFF


    That's not the answer I was looking for.





    LINDA


    Leave me alone, you creepo.





    GRIFF


    You want it. You know want me to give it to you.




    Linda is up so upset by his crude remark, she slaps him across the face.​





    LINDA


    Shut your filthy mouth!


    I'm not that kind of girl.




    The whole canteen turns to see the commotion as Linda tries to move away.


    Griff grabs a hold of her arm aggressively. Griff is too strong and puts fear


    into Linda.​





    GRIFF


    Well maybe you are and you don't know it yet.





    LINDA


    Get your meat hooks off of me.




    SUDDENLY AN ANGRY MALE VOICE IS HEARD APPROACHING.​





    CARLOS (O.S.).


    You heard her.




    INT. CARLOS.


    Carlo grabs Griff by the Collar and pulls him away from Linda.​





    CARLOS


    She said get your Meat Hooks...!




    Carlos realizes how much taller Griff still is compared to himself.


    And in a way to calm the situation, straightens Griff's collar out.​





    CARLOS


    Uh - Please.




    Griff sees Carlos as a threat to his attempts to woo Linda and starts


    to become violent.​





    GRIFF


    So, what's it got to do with you Butthead?


    Huh, Richmond.




    Griff pushes him with force.​





    GRIFF


    Come to save your girlfriend huh.


    Gotta get through me first.




    Carlos desperately wants to stand up for Linda, who watches on


    with concern. Griff shoves him again.​





    GRIFF


    You wanna have a poke at me cmon.




    Carlos in anger shoves into a table and gets covered in food.


    Carlos delivers a warning to Griff, pointing his finger at him.​





    CARLOS


    You stay away from her!




    Griff hesitates and turns to his cronies for assistance.





    GRIFF


    Hold him.




    Zap, Derk and Wolf charge at Carlos and they restrain him.


    Griff punches Carlos in the stomach and then in the face.


    Linda jumps on Griff's back and starts him, trying to pull him off.​





    LINDA


    Leave him alone you Bastard!




    Griff shoves her away, as he prepares to continue his assault on Carlos, with


    the whole Canteen of Students witnessing the fight.



    INT. MRS STRICKLAND.





    Mrs Strickland barges in and shouts out.​





    STRICKLAND


    That's quite enough Tannen!




    Griff pulls back and the other cronies let Carlo's go, who falls


    to the floor in some pain. Linda goes to tend to her boyfriend.


    Strickland marches over to the bullies.​





    STRICKLAND


    OK Tannen to my office now!





    GRIFF


    He started it.





    STRICKLAND


    Office now!


    (Strickland turns to Zap, Derk and Wolf)


    That goes for you too.




    Griff hesitates momentarily and looks down on an injured Carlos, who


    is be cared for by Linda.​





    GRIFF


    I've just cut you an easy break.


    Next time Richmond, make like a tree


    and mind your business.




    Griff, Zap, Derk and Wolf exit the Canteen. Strickland


    turns her attentions to Linda and Carlo's, but does seem


    compassionate.​





    STRICKLAND


    You two are already in enough trouble as it is with your tardiness.




    Linda is upset to think, that she and Carlos are responsible for Griff's actions.​





    LINDA


    Carlo's didn't do anything wrong. He was defending me.


    Griff was harassing me.





    STRICKLAND


    Enough excuses Mcfly.


    Nobody like a slacker.


    That's an extra detention..both of you.




    Mrs Strickland proceeds to her office to deal with Griff and his pals.


    Carlos sits up with a cut lip and feeling bruised. Linda rubs his head.


    Carlos is rather pissed.​





    LINDA


    Sorry.


    And thank you





    CARLOS


    Yeah, some job at being a hero.





    LINDA


    Well..


    at least you're human.





    Carlos smiles with the comfort at knowing, how Linda feels.


    Linda smiles at him too.











     
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    Wednesday


    October 21st 2015


    3:02. P.M.










    EXT. LYONS ESTATE ENTRANCE


    POURING RAIN.





    EXT. MARTY MCFLY CAR.



    Marty's car is seen driving into Lyons Estate.


    It's still pouring with heavy persistant rain.








    EXT. LORRAINE/GEORGE MCFLY HOME.​




    Marty pulls up onto the driveway of his parents home and comes to a stop.





    EXT. MARTY MCFLY.​




    Marty exits his car, covering his head with a suitcase, to hide from the rain.


    He hurries to the front door.





    INT. MARTY MCFLY.​




    Marty quickly enters the house and shuts the door behind him.





    INT. LORRAINE BAINES MCFLY.


    Lorraine about 77 years old appears from the kitchen.​





    LORRAINE


    Marty! You made it.





    MARTY


    Hi Mom.




    Marty and Lorraine exchange kisses.


    Lorraine tugs at his coat.




    LORRAINE


    You're soaking wet.


    Here let me dry this off for you.




    Marty takes off his overcoat and hands it too his mother.​





    MARTY


    Thanks Mom.





    LORRAINE


    Linda should be home shortly.


    I have chicken soup for dinner.





    MARTY


    That's great mom.




    Marty looks around the house. His father George does not seem


    to be present.​





    MARTY


    Where's Dad?




    Lorraine walks back into the kitchen and starts up the Coffee Perculator.​





    LORRAINE


    Down at the Golf Course.




    Mom raises his eyebrows, wondering why his father would take up


    his hobbie in such dreadful weather.​





    MARTY


    In this downpour? Is he nuts?





    LORRAINE


    Well, you know your father.


    (Lorraine hands Marty a Mug of Coffee)


    This weather has taken a turn for the worst lately.


    I hope it's not a sign for something...nothing bad I hope anyway.


    You know like Global Warming.




    Marty looks out the window at the sky. The sky looks dull and grey.


    The clouds seem bleak and dark. This kind of worries Marty a little.​





    MARTY


    At least we haven't had it bad since Novemeber 12th 1955.





    LORRAINE


    Only the Clocktower recieved the brunt force of that night. God, it feels just like yesterday.


    Was the same night your father kissed me for the very first time at the


    Enchantment under the Sea Dance. Did I ever tell you that story?




    Marty needs little introduction to that event, as he was present that evening - Twice.


    Marty rolls his eyes to his mothers question, as it seems she referred to that night over and over.​





    MARTY


    Yeah, Mom. You told us that story a million times already.





    LORRAINE


    You sound like your sister. God rest her soul.





    MARTY


    How longs it been?





    LORRAINE


    Twenty years ago next month.




    There is momentarily awkward silence. It appears Linda Mcfly, aunt


    to Marty's daughter, Linda, had died from certain circumstances years earlier.


    Lorraine appears to be emotionally upset by talking about it and manages to hold


    back the tears.​





    LORRAINE


    Dave called he will try get over from Australia for Christmas.





    MARTY


    Great. Haven't seen him in almost..five years.





    LORRAINE


    Anyway, Linda should be home soon. We all need to sit down and talk.





    MARTY


    Right.




    There hesitation from the two. Marty is reminded of the Letter


    that Lorraine mentioned earlier that morning, when he was on his way


    to work.​





    MARTY


    Oh by the way, you said you had a letter for me.





    LORRAINE


    Yeah it's over here.




    Lorraine fetches the envelope and hands it to Marty, who takes it nervously.


    He begins to wonder what the contents of the letter might be.​





    LORRAINE


    Kinda of strange for the Mr Union Guy to suggest it's been in their possession for Ninety years.




    Marty's eyes are momentarily fixed on the enevelope.


    He then looks up to face his mother.​





    MARTY


    Yeah. He was probably joking.





    LORRAINE


    I wonder who this friend of yours is.


    Friend In Time. Not Einstein is it?





    MARTY


    Huh?


    Oh yeah..I see what you mean.





    LORRAINE


    I'll finish off in the kitchen. And when Linda gets home...


    we can sit down and be a family.




    Lorraine leaves the living room and goes to fix dinner in the kitchen.


    Marty looks at the envelope as he wanders across the Living Room.


    Marty sits down on the couch and keeps and begins to think of the possibility


    that Doc is trying to contact him. He hesitates and then slowly starts to open the


    envelope. He pulls out to sheets of white paper, with News Clippings.​




    A NEWSPAPER ARTICLE FROM BOTH LOS ANGELES AND HILL VALLEY ARE SHOWN.





    In the Los Angeles Article it is dated "Tuesday October 29th 1985."


    The Article reads. "NUCLEAR ATTACK PREVENTED." "Downtown Libyan threat Thwarted. Millions Saved."




    The Hill Valley Telegraph News Article is a reminder to Marty.


    The Article is dated. "Monday October 28th 1985."


    The Article reads. "AUTHORITIES UNSURE ON MALL SHOOTOUT." "Terrorists Captured."


    A picture of a Vaulks Wagon Minivan is show partially tip over, smashed into the Foto Stand.​







    Marty starts to worry. Why would Doc send him News Articles based on the Libyans,


    whom Doc ripped Plutonium off in 1985, to power the Delorean Time Machine? Could it hold key


    to something that needs to be resolved and how vital is it, for Doc to send Marty this letter at this point


    in time? Marty begins to read the two page letter.​


     
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    DOC'S VOICE IS VOICED BEHIND THE SENT LEATER




    FLASHBACKS ARE ALSO DEPICTED DURING THE READING.








    INT. MARTY MCFLY.





    Marty reads the letter.​











    DOC. LETTER. (O.S.).





    Dear Marty.





    My best friend in the whole wide World. I'm sorry that I haven't been able to keep in touch or visited you in such a long time. From your perspective, it's been almost thirty years since we last saw each other, but from mine it's been only a few years.




    Marty frowns at confusion, by Doc's statement.


    If Marty hasn't seen Doc since 1985, how come Doc is


    suggesting, he hasn't seen Marty in only a few years?


    Marty continues to read Doc's letter.​





    DOC. LETTER. (CONT'UED) (O.S.).





    You must be confused by that statement. I know, time is confusing, especially in Time Travel. I'll explain, as what I'm about to tell, could have potentially have serious consequences to the Space Time Continuum and ultimately - the Universe. As you are aware on the morning of October 26th 1985, I arrived from the future and brought both you and Jennifer to October 21st 2015. The future was beyond anything anybody could have have imagined. Technology was so advanced, with flying automobiles, Hoverboards, Television Cell Phones, the list could go on.




    (Flashbacks from Part II.





    The Delorean arriving in 2015 from 1985, with Marty, Doc and Jennifer.





    Marty enters the Town Square, with Hill Valley far more advanced than the 2015, that Marty now lives in. )







    As you are now aware, things are now different from your point of view. It breaks my heart, it's finding the words to tell someone, whom I looked upon as a son.




    Martys eyes fill with tears, as he continues to read the


    letter. He fears what Doc could reveal to him, as it seems


    Doc is unaware on what happened to Jennifer.​








    DOC. LETTER (CONT'UED) (O.S.).





    The next point to my revelation, is what I did, was what I thought was the best thing to do for the sake of the World.


    I'm sure you remember the night I unveiled the Time Machine to you and the experiment involving Einstein?


    I informed you that I fooled a group of Libyan Nationalist's who wanted me to build them a bomb and that I took their Plutonium and in turn gave them a shoddy bomb case full of used Pinball Machine parts. Minutes later they showed up at the Mall and tried to murder me and you. However by the time they failed, you already had escaped to 1955, while your otherself had returned and discovered I had read your warning note, to which I wore a Bulletproof vest and survived.




    (Flashback from Part I.





    The Time Machine rolls out of Doc's Truck.


    Time Travel Experient. Einstein is sent one minute into the future.


    The Libyans show up at the Mall, as Doc warns Marty.


    Doc is shot and the Libyans chased Marty I.​

    Marty I disappears to 1955 and the Libyans crash their van.


    Marty II rushes over to Doc and discovered he survived the attack, by the warning note. )







    The thing is Marty, I never revealed to you, that there were more of them, not just two. If you remember vividly, on Monday October 28th 1985, a vengeful group threatened Los Angeles, with a Nuclear Warhead and demanded that the two terrorists that attacked us at the Mall be released, or they would kill millions. Originally, they succeeded and the aftermath was Catastrophe. It put immense pressure on our country and started the way for technology to advance to the point of what you witnessed on your arrival in 2015 originally. There were super advanced national security satellites and systems that could detect a terrorist immediatly, long before a threat could become even close. For this, we had Goldie Wilson II to thank for his enthusiasm and superb thinking, that made him a legend. His inspiration, was followed on by his heir, Goldie Wilson III, who created the future of the Hover Conversion, Hoverboards, self drying clothes, a future that everybody dreams of. The advance in scientific technology also gave hope to curing Cancers, other disease and the findings of Stem Cell Research. You were so dedictated Marty - and so was I.




    (Flashbacks from a previous timeline.





    On October 28th 1985, a group of Libyan Terrorists detonate a Bomb in Los Angeles and the city is wiped off the map.


    Advanced Satellite Systems and Security Data thwart terrorism.


    Goldie Wilson II and Goldie Wilson III become famous for their advancements. )​





    You see Marty, I'm aware that you have Parkinsons. It breaks my heart to know this has caught up with you. And I blame myself. If not for me building that Time Machine, your constant journey into the Space Time Continuum on that October weekend in 1985, wouldn't have had such a cruel effect on you. I know how much your music career meant to you, but Jennifer was so proud of your fight against this terrible disease. The fight was long and hard, but you kept trying and my science was prolonged and stop start, but I wanted to succeed. Clara understood how I felt about this. She and the boys were terrific and we headed off into the future as far we could, but were finding it hard. I was also aware, your sister Linda was in a battle of her own and with the advances we had for Cancer, she won an incredible battle against all odds. Yours, was a little harder. It's even harder now, for what I'm about to confess to you. Please, please don't hate me for this.




    (FLASHBACK FROM A SEPERATE TIMELINE





    Marty is told by Doctors he has Parkinsons.


    'The Mcfly Stem Cell Research Foundation' is shown.


    Marty and Jennifer embracing​

    The Time Train journeying threw the Space Time Continuum.​








    Even though I had journeyed to other timelines, even before I met Clara, I was unaware of the Nuclear attack on Los Angeles, not until I met Goldie Wilson myself. He said 'It was his duty to never allow an disaster like that happen again.' I was shocked. How could I have missed this event? I was a constant time traveller. Maybe it was an event that everybody wanted to forget in a hurry. Can't say I blamed them. I knew in my heart, I couldn't allow millions of innocent people die. I mean, it was because of me, duping the Libyans, that they did what they did. I had to rectify the situation. I went back to 1985 and prevented the detonation and saved millions. When I returned to the future, things were different, there was no advanced technology, no Stem Cell Research. No cure for cancer. And when I realized what happened to your sister I knew there was a consequence, for the good I thought I was doing. I even learnt of the September 11th attacks, of which I discovered your beloved Jennifer had tragically passed in New York. Leaving you and your daughter behind. I didn't realize, what a sacrifice I had done to save many million tragedies. You see, the Government had thought the Libyans demands were fake, as I took the detonater and in return gave them fake money. This determined that no such threat of nuclear war, was ever upon us and it never occurred to the Generations of Wilsons, that advanced techonology for Security measures or luxuries was needed. Since this event, I have stopped myself from time travelling and have even prevented Jules and Verne for the foreseeable future, ceasing time travel.




    (Flashback from restored timeline.





    Doc prevents the Libyans attack on Los Angeles.​




    Linda's funeral.





    September 11th 2001 attacks are depicted on a T.V. leaving Marty horrified.





    Jennifers funeral.​




    Marty is a broken man. )​





    I'm so very sorry Marty, it's come to this. But, to hear of the mess I created, I had to fix it. I didn't know it was gonna come to this. The last thing I ever wanted, was to hurt your future. But, the future has effects in the past also, which is why I must ask of an extremley important favour and the events upcoming must happen or the Universe could be in jeopardy. As I stated previously, we arrived on October 21st 2015, which ultimately led to Biff stealing the Time Machine, giving his 1955 self an Almanac and creating an alternate 1985. When we learnt of this scenario, we returned to November 12th 1955, where you successfully retrieved the Almanac and destroyed it. During the heavy thunderstorm, I was in peril in mid air and was struck by Lightening and sent back to 1885, where I met and fell in love with Clara and had two wonderful children. And thanks to you saving me from Buford Tannen, this was made possible. Due to the changing of events between 1985 and 2015, you only had one daughter and not Marty Junior and Marlene Mcfly. Your two offsprings were the reason I brought you to the future, which made the events I referred to previously, possible. If the events leading from 2015 to 1885 are not repeated, every moment through the Space Time Continuum and Universe will be at an end. Due to the possibility of our younger selves not arriving from 1985, the only two options you have to rely on, is convincing Biff to take the Almanac for him to somehow end up back in 1955 or to seek the help of my previous counterpart who arrived originally from 1985 on Monday Octoer 26th 2015 and for him to eventually end up in 1885, without the aid of the Hover Converted Delorean, due to me being struck by lightening in the sky. This situation is entirely out of my hands and cannot allow either myself or my sons to interfere, as to not confuse events or risk a Paradox.

    (Flashbacks. From Parts II & III.





    Marty fighting Griff in 2015.





    Biff Stealing the Time Machine.​

    Alternate 1985 Clips - Hill Valley High School Burnt Down.


    Biff's Casino Hotel.​




    Marty being knocked out by his original self in 1955.


    Marty fighting Biff for the book. Tunnel chase.


    Marty burns the book.


    Doc struck by Lightening.


    Marty seeking 1955 Doc at the Town Square.​




    Marty sent back to 1885.


    Doc meeting Clara.


    Marty punching out Buford.


    Doc and Clara arriving in 1985, via time train. )​








    And so now I bid farewell to you my friend and God speed. You were like a son to me and I will treasure our relationship with warm feelings and a special place in my heart. Please forgive me Marty. I wish it had it never come to this. Hopefully, another time, another place. I hope to explain.


    Your friend in time


    Doc


    Emmett L Brown.





    July 4th


    1915








    END OF DOC'S LETTER.







    INT. MARTY MCFLY.





    Marty is in complete tears and is devestated by the contents​

    of his friends letter. He thumps the chair. He places the articles


    and letter inside the envelope and picks up his overcoat.


    Marty rushes to the front door and leaves the house.​




    INT. LORRAINE.





    Lorraine hurries out of the kitchen and sees Marty is


    not in the room.​





    LORRAINE


    Marty?​





    An engine can be heard reving up and Lorraine quickly walks to the


    front door and opens it.​




    EXT. LYONS ESTATE





    EXT. LORRAINE.





    EXT. MARTY'S CAR.​




    Marty is seen reversing off the driveway in the pouring rain and speeds off.


    Lorraine wonders, why Marty has left abruptly and it leaves her concerned.​






     
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    EXT. HILL VALLEY TOWN SQUARE



    The rain pours profusely.



    THE CAMERA PANS DOWN TO GROUND LEVEL.



    EXT. MARTY MCFLY.



    Marty is seen rushing across the road and a car honks at him, almost knocking him down.

    He runs up to a Memorabilia store and looks through the window.

    Jaws and Jaws 2 VHS Tapes are shown and then he comes across the

    GRAYS SPORTS ALMANAC depicted in PART II. Marty puffs his cheeks.





    MARTY


    Perfect.


    (to himself)​





    EXT. MARTY MCFLY.



    EXT. GRAYS SPORTS ALMANAC.



    A few minutes pass and he now has the sports book.

    Marty checks his watch. It's 4:10 PM. It's ninteen minutes

    prior, to when he arrived with Doc and Marty from 1985.

    However, it's unlikely that will happen due to dramatic change

    to the timeline. Marty heads towards the Cafe 80's.





    INT. CAFE 80'S.



    INT. MARTY MCFLY.



    Marty enters the cafe, soaking wet. It's nothing like shown in Part II. It's a regular modern day 2015 Cafe.

    The cafe falls into silence, when he enters. He nervously walks to the counter.



    INT. LILA, OWNER OF CAFE.



    Lila watches Marty walk towards the counter and pull up a stool. He scours the room for Biff, who does not appear to be present.



    LILA


    Hey Mcfly. What'll it be?​



    Marty, hesitates briefly.



    MARTY


    Uh. Oh yeah, give me, give me a tab.





    LILA


    Tab? I can't give you a tab. You owe me five tabs from the last month.​



    Marty again hesitates again.



    MARTY


    Right. How much do I owe?



    Lila throws a slip down.



    LILA


    Regular coffee I gather?​



    Marty nods. He glances round to see the continous downpour.

    He again looks at his watch. He thinks that in a matter of time the

    rain will stop and the skys will clear, as it did shortly, after he, Doc

    and Jennifer arrived. Lila glances over to Marty as she cleans the counter.



    LILA


    You're usually only in here for Breakfast.





    MARTY


    Yeah. I'm waiting for somebody.


    (he scours the cafe again)


    Have you seen Biff by any chance?​



    Lila starts stacking Mugs and Saucers into piles.



    LILA


    Probably, clogging up the Toilet again. Thinking of charging the old


    codger.​



    Marty raises his eyebrow, feeling a little nauseus.



    MARTY


    Nice.





    LILA


    If you're looking for a car wax, I wouldn't consider it anyway.


    Have you looked outside?​



    Marty laughs a little.



    LILA


    Besides he over charges anyway.​



    Lila leaves Marty momentarily. Marty again looks at his watch.



    INT. BIFF TANNEN.



    Seventy Seven Year Old, Biff Tannen appears hobbling out of the Mens Room. Marty spots him.

    Lila marches over to the side of the counter. She does not look too happy.



    LILA


    I hope you've cleaned up in there Tannen. Otherwise I will be sending you a Bill.





    BIFF


    Stop nagging, will ya Lila. I always clean up after me.





    LILA


    I beg to differ. Just because you got your car clogged up with Horse Shit


    doesn't mean, you gotta take out my business and try driving


    my customers away.





    BIFF


    Relax


    That was sixty years ago.


    I ain't that bitter.​



    Marty overhears the disagreement between Biff and Lila.



    MARTY


    No, really?


    (to himself)​



    Biff hobbles to a table by the window. Marty stands up slowly and walks over to the

    table where his nemesis sits. Marty sits down, facing opposite Biff. Biff frowns and

    wonders why is invading his private space.



    BIFF


    Mcfly. What do you want?





    MARTY


    Just to see how you doing?​



    Biff finds this odd, considering his past history with the Mcfly's.



    BIFF


    You're asking me, how I'm doing?


    That's a first. From you.





    MARTY


    Well, yeah. I mean is... we are getting older now.​

    I know, you're still bitter about Dad punching you out all them years


    ago...​



    Biff interrupts Marty, in an aggressive tone.



    BIFF


    Yeah, rub it in, why don't you Butthead!​

    The conversation seems to be rather uncomfortable for Biff.



    MARTY


    Life hasn't been great for me either. There are times I wish I could go back and fix everything.


    I wish I could go back and save Jennifer. Bring my sister back. Find a cure this disease I have.


    I bet you wish, you could go back and win my mothers heart.​



    Biff is finding Marty's words rather odd and pulls a face.



    BIFF


    Mcfly are you on drug? You're not having a heart to heart with me are ya?


    And since when did you care about my feelings for your mother?



    Marty shrugs and thinks for a moment.



    MARTY


    I'm not.


    And what happened to not being bitter.





    BIFF


    I'm not.


    By the way, I've putting my car waxing prices up.


    Thought I give you a heads up.​



    Marty nods awkwardly.



    MARTY


    Right.​



    Marty hesitates. Biff now starts to feel real annoyed by Marty's presence.



    BIFF


    Was there anything else, Mcfly?​



    Marty reaches inside his coat and pulls out the GRAYS SPORTS ALMANAC.

    He places it on the table. Biff pulls a face.





    BIFF


    What's that? Gray's Sports Almanac.





    MARTY


    Don't you recognise it?


    BIFF


    Never seen it before in my life. Why would I?​



    MARTY


    Thing is Biff....​



    SUDDENLY A LOUD VOICE SOUNDS BEHIND MARTY.

    MARTY JUMPS.



    GRIFF


    (O.S.).


    Hey, Gramps. I want to you put two coats on my car if you don't mind!





    BIFF


    Yeah, right. I ain't getting soaked for the sake of your Ford Fusion.​



    GRIFF WALKS INTO FRAME AND TEASES HIS GRAND FATHER.



    INT. GRIFF TANNEN.



    GRIFF


    What's the matter Gramps, scared of a little rain water?


    (Griff notice Marty staring)


    What are you looking at Mcfly?


    Say hi to your daughter for me.


    (He looks back to his grandfather with a meaningful look)


    You coming or what?



    Biff gets to his feet grasping his cane tightly.



    BIFF


    Later, Mcfly. Hope you enjoy your sports book.


    Oh by the way, say hi to your Mom for me.



    Griff is about to escort Biff out into the pouring rain. When Marty stands up

    and shouts out.





    MARTY


    Calvin Klein!​



    Biff stops in his tracks and is caught off guard.

    He recognizes the name. He turns to face Marty.



    BIFF


    What about him?


    Your father tell you?​



    MARTY


    Yeah sort of.





    BIFF


    Look Mcfly. I haven't seen that Son Of A Bitch in sixty years. Its someone I'd rather forget.​



    Biff turns around again, but Marty calls out again.



    MARTY


    Don't you remember?


    He stole this book from you on November 12th 1955.​



    This reminder grabs Biff's attention.



    BIFF


    I never told anybody about that book.


    What kind of game you playing?





    MARTY


    This book would have made you rich. It's tells the results of every sporting event up until the year 2000. All you had to do was bet on a winner and you'd never lose.​



    BIFF


    Some old codger with a cane showed up and gave me that book.





    MARTY


    That was you Biff.​



    BIFF


    Yeah right.​



    Biff goes into denial.

    Griff is unimpressed by Marty's wild story and

    laughs it off and tugs on his Grand fathers arm.



    GRIFF


    C'mon Gramps. He's lost his mind.





    MARTY


    No I haven't. And you know why?


    Because I was there. In fact two of me were there that fateful day.​



    Griff chuckles hysterically. But, this doesn't stop Marty with his revelation.



    MARTY


    I was hiding in the backseat of your car, when you gave your younger self this Almanac.


    And your last warning was 'Someday a kid or some crazy wild eyed man who claims to be a scientist will show up asking about that book.'


    Nobody else, but you could have known that.​



    BIFF HAS A BRIEF FLASHBACK OF HIS ALTERNATE 2015 SELF HANDING HIS 1955 COUNTERPART

    THE ALMANAC.



    BIFF


    How could have you? You weren't even born until 1968.





    MARTY


    But, I was. I'm Calvin Klein.​



    There's momentary silence. Until everyone in the cafe laughs, apart from Marty and Biff.

    Marty feels like a fool, but this kind of rings through to Biff and he stomps his cane on the floor

    feeling a sense of anxiety, about what Marty is claiming. The laughs stop and his face turns red.



    BIFF


    How can you be Calvin Klein?


    You look nothing alike.​



    MARTY


    Oh c'mon Biff. Why do you think I spent that week prior to the Enchantment Under The Sea Dance, trying to get George and Lorraine together? I'm the one that made you crash into that horse shit - twice. Don't you remember, when you chased me through that tunnel and you saw me, cling onto a line?​



    Biff starts to think back to November 12th 1955. Biff catches a glimpse of his reflection in the window.



    BRIEF FLASHBACKS



    Marty sat next to George on November 5th 1955, while Biff bullies him.

    Marty punching Biff in Lou's cafe and outside the Enchantment under the Sea Dance.

    George Punching Biff.

    Part I Marty knocking Part II Marty out with the door, after Biff called Part II Marty chicken.

    Biff crashing into the Manure Trucks in both Part I & II.



    He then remembers the flying Delorean in 1955 and 1985.



    Biff takes this all in.





    BIFF


    Holy shit.​



    MARTY


    I know Biff. That's why I need your help. If you don't go back to November 12th 1955, we could have a paradox.​



    The customers in the diner who are listening let out hysterical laughs. Griff is almost

    on his knees, finding the whole thing hilarious.



    GRIFF


    C'mon Gramps. Don't be taken in by this nut jub.



    It takes a few moments for Biff to react and he too laughs out hysterically. Marty is dumbfounded, that

    he appears to not have convinced Biff enough, to believe his story.



    MOMENTS LATER, BIFF IS IS CLUTCHING HIS CHEST AND HE KEELS OVER AND DROPS DEAD ON THE FLOOR

    FROM A FATAL HEART ATTACK!



    The laughing stops and now everybody has a face of utter shock and dismay. Griff is stunned. Marty is horrified. Marty moves slowly towards Biff and checks his pulse. He freezes for a short time and realizes

    everything is now in serious jeopardy. He stands above Biff's lifeless body and looks at Griff, who is now traumatised.



    MARTY


    He's Dead.​



    The cafe remains silent. In panic Marty takes the Almanac and rushes out of the cafe.



    EXT. HILL VALLEY TOWN SQUARE.



    Marty hurries out of the cafe in panic and runs across the Town Square in the pouring rain.



     
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    NIGHT.


    EXT. POURING RAIN.


    The rain continues to pour


    EXT. MARTY MCFLY HOME.





    INT. HOUSE.​

    The camera slowly moves down the Hallway to a Bathroom.​




    INT. MARTY MCFLY.


    Marty is seen washing his face with cold water. He is in complete shock following


    Biff's abrupt death from a Heart Attack. He stares momentarily at his reflection in


    the mirror, before leaving the Bathroom.​




    INT. BEDROOM.





    INT. GRAYS SPORTS ALMANAC.





    Marty picks up the Sports Book, that caused him trouble originally,


    which involved Biff creating an Alternated 1985, when he gave it to his younger​

    in 1955. Marty then picks up the letter, that Doc of 1915 sent him, warning him


    of the changed Timeline and that a possible Paradox may bring the end of the Universe.



    INT. PHOTOGRAPH. MARTY. JENNIFER (WELLS OR SHUE). LINDA (AS A BABY).





    Marty picks it up and touches it feeling emotional.


    Marty puts it back down and picks up the phone.​







    INT. LORRAINE / GEORGE MCFLY HOME.





    INT. LINDA MCFLY /BEDROOM.





    Linda sits with her arms folded while watching TV.​

    A News Bulletin reports "That Marty is wanted in questioning for Harassing Biff Tannen

    to death."


    The phone rings and she answers it.​








    LINDA


    Hello?




    INT. MARTY MCFLY





    MARTY


    Hi sweetheart. It's me.





    LINDA


    Dad. Where've you been? It's just said on the news about Biff dying from Heart Attack.


    People are saying you harassed him to death.


    Now Griff is gonna harass me.





    MARTY


    I'm sorry Linda. Things just got out of hand.





    LINDA (O.S.).


    Grandma said, you ran out the house after you read some letter sent to you.





    MARTY


    It's nothing.





    LINDA


    I doubt that.





    MARTY (O.S.).


    I'm sorry I've been neglecting you. But, I'm gonna make it up to you.




    Linda's eyes start to fill with tears.​





    LINDA


    As much as I want to believe you - I can't.


    As much as I love you.




    Marty is touched by this and holds back tears.​





    MARTY


    I love you Linda. And you tell Grandma I love her too.




    Linda feels uneasy by her fathers tone.​





    LINDA


    Daddy, I know you missed dinner, but why don't you come over?


    We can talk, like we all promised we would. I'll defend you if the police call.




    Marty hesitates.​





    MARTY


    I've got to go now. I need to go away for a while.


    But, when I come back. Our Future will be a better one -


    for all of us.




    Marty looks out his bedroom window and sees a Patrol Car pulling​

    up outside.​





    LINDA


    Daddy ...





    MARTY


    I've got to go honey Bye bye.




    INT. LINDA MCFLY





    Marty hangs up. Linda is concerned.


    There's a knock on the door.​


    LINDA


    Yeah?




    INT. LORRAINE MCFLY





    Lorraine enters her Grand Daughters Bedroom.​





    LORRAINE


    Linda who was that on the phone?





    LINDA


    It was Daddy. He doesn't sound right.





    LORRAINE


    I guess you heard. Biff died from a Heart Attack.


    Griff is threatening to make him pay and the Police


    want to question your father on Harassment Charges.





    LINDA


    Grandma, what are we going to do, if Daddy goes AWOL?


    He's not well. He's vulnerable. He needs us.




    Lorraine sits beside Linda and holds her hand.​





    LORRAINE


    He will. But, until this dies down, I suggest you stay off school for a few days.





    LINDA


    How do you feel?


    About Biff I mean?





    LORRAINE


    He was never my number one fan. I can assure you that.


    But, he did mellow following High School and your Grand Father put him in his place.




    Linda thinks for a moment.​





    LINDA


    What about this Calvin Klein?





    LORRAINE


    The Fashion Designer?




    Linda laughs a little.​





    LINDA


    No. I mean the guy that brought you and Grandpa together. Did you ever see him again?




    Lorraine thinks for a moment, almost confused.​





    LORRAINE


    That's kind of vague. Although he play some interesting music for it's time at the


    Enchantment Under The Sea Dance. Funny that was the last time we saw him.


    Did your Grandpa tell you about him?





    LINDA


    Yeah. He said he was so desperate to get you two together. Like it was his destiny or something.


    He taught him how to stand up for himself. His real name was Marty too.





    LORRAINE


    I believe so.


    What made you think of him anyway?





    LINDA


    Well, it's just you said about, Grandpa standing up for himself against Biff and I figured it was because of this stranger.




    Lorraine smiles and kisses Linda on the head.​





    LORRAINE


    Well, it all worked out well in the end. I'm sure you and your father will work it out too.




    Lorraine goes to exit.​





    LINDA


    Grandma?




    Lorraine turns.​





    LORRAINE


    Yes sweetheart.





    LINDA


    Do you ever wish you could go back and change destiny?





    LORRAINE


    ......I think about it all the time.


    Goodnight sweetheart.




    Linda smiles.​





    LINDA


    Night.




























     
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    BLANK SCREEN








    Monday


    October 26


    2015





    APPEARS ON THE SCREEN







    0:2:17. A.M.





    EXT. RAIN.


    DARK.





    EXT. LYONS ESTATE





    THE CAMERA PANS DOWNWARD IN TERRENTIAL RAIN.





    EXT. MARTY MCFLY​




    EXT. LORRAINE/GEORGE MCFLY RESIDENCE.





    Marty conceals himself behind a Bush, outside his former home of 1985.


    He is in a hooded jacket and wears Blue Jeans and Trainers. He glances at his watch.


    It reads 2:17.a.m.​




    EXT. POLICE CAR.





    A Police Cruiser crawls down the street and Marty jolts back keeping himself out of the Police cars view.


    The Police car passes by and he waits for it to go further towards the Estates exit.


    Marty tries to move cautiously, but then knocks over a Trash can and scares a Cat away.


    He is annoyed by this.​





    MARTY


    Shit.


    (whispers to himself)




    Marty straightens the Trash Can. He again looks at his watch. It now reads 2:18.a.m.


    He appears tense and anxious.





    Suddenly, the main front door of the Mcfly opens.​




    EXT. LINDA MCFLY.





    17 year old Linda Mcfly appears in his casual clothes and spots her father acting suspiciously.




    LINDA


    Dad?




    Marty jumps, as he is caught off guard by his offspring. He turns swiftly.​





    MARTY


    Linda.




    Linda moves away from the front door and into the pouring rain. She pulls a face.​





    LINDA


    What the hell are you doing?




    Marty looks back nervously, as if he is expecting something - or someone. He hestiates answering


    his daughters question. He faces her feeling anxious and nervous.




    MARTY


    Nothing. What are you doing up at this hour?





    LINDA


    Uh - you woke me up.





    MARTY


    What with the rain that's been lashing down all week, you heard a trash can?




    Linda rolls her eyes and sighs .​





    LINDA


    OK I was awake. What are you doing out here? Trying to get pneumonia?


    (sarcastically)




    Marty looks at his watch again and looks left and right down the street.


    Linda eyes follow where Marty is looking and she walks towards him.




    LINDA


    Daddy, why don't you come inside? You'll catch a cold. I'll make us some Coco.




    Marty keeps his back to his daughter. He seems to be really impatient.​





    MARTY


    He should be here.


    (to himself)




    Linda heard Marty refer to his last sentence.​





    LINDA


    Who you talking about?





    MARTY


    Nobody. Go inside Linda.





    LINDA


    Daddy. I think....




    Marty is frustrated by Linda's presence and turns around angrily.​





    MARTY


    Linda. Will you shut up. You shouldn't be here!





    LINDA


    Well, when is more convenient for you. I mean I am your daughter after all, not like one of your guitars you can dump off when ever you feel like.




    Marty realizes how upset he has made her. He tries to calm the situation.​





    MARTY


    Linda. I'm sorry. I didn't mean...





    LINDA


    That's always an easy word for you isn't it. Sorry. Well I'm sick of hearing it and giving you a chance for us to be a family again. Goodnight Dad. Enjoy the weather.




    Linda turns around crying and goes to head back inside the house.





    SUDDENLY THE RAIN STOPS.​




    Linda stops and turns to look at the sky. Marty to looks up and the Dark sky reveals stars.


    The two are amazed.




    LINDA


    Wow. Finally.




    Marty doesn't answer. He has a feeling that something is about to happen.


    A few moments pass. Silence.





    THEN A GUSH OF WIND BLOWS AND BOTH MARTY AND LINDA STAND THEIR GROUND AS THE WIND PICKS UP. THEN THE WIND STOPS.



    Then Marty hears his watch bleep. He looks at his watch again. It reads. 2:20 a.m.





    SUDDENLY THREE SUPER SONIC BOOMS ARE HEARD, ALONG WITH THREE FLASHES OF LIGHT!






    EXT. DMC DELOREAN TIME MACHINE.





    A Delorean Sports Car appears out of nowhere past the Mcfly house and hits a FIRE HYDRANT


    just before the Estate Entrance and comes to a sudden stop just outside.​




    Marty and Linda pace themselves to the Entrance/ Exit of where the Delorean stopped.


    Water is gushing across the street from the hydrant.


    The Delorean looks Frozen. Marty and Linda wait for something to happen.



    THEN THE GULLWING DOOR FLIPS OPEN.





    EXT. EINSTEIN.





    Out steps Doc Browns Sheep Dog.



    EXT. DOC BROWN '85.'





    Doc Brown from October 26th 1985 appears in a WHITE RADIATION SUIT, wearing an


    Hawaian T-Shirt underneath. He looks to his surroundings and is somewhat shocked by crashing


    into the Hydrant.​





    DOC


    Great Scott!




    Linda is astonished by what she's just witnessed and takes a few


    steps forward. Doc spots her.​





    DOC


    What year is this?





    LINDA


    Pardon?




    Marty appears beside his daughter and is elated to see Doc.​





    MARTY


    Doc?




    Doc's eyes light up when he sees his friend.​





    DOC


    Marty!




    Einstein barks.





    Marty and Doc embrace.




    MARTY


    You made it.





    DOC


    Course I did. I promised I'd look you up when I got here.




    Marty is get all emotional. He can't believe he's finally got to see his bestest friend again,


    even if it's an earlier version of Doc.​





    MARTY


    I've missed you Doc. You don't know how much.





    DOC


    I know my friend. Weird I've just left your 1985 version a few moments ago. But, I still missed you.




    Marty smiles and Linda stands silent. Still in shock. Einstein wines and Marty pets him.​





    MARTY


    Hey Einie. I never forgot you.




    Doc looks over to Linda.​





    DOC


    And whom is this younger lady?




    Marty introduces Doc and Linda to each other.​





    MARTY


    This is....my daughter.


    Linda this is Doctor Emmett Brown. My friend.....from 1985.








    LINDA


    No shit.







    Doc pulls Marty aside feeling a little concerned.​





    DOC


    Marty why did you bring her to meet me?





    MARTY


    Sorry Doc. She caught me waiting for you. I should have been more careful Doc, I know. But, don't worry she won't say a word.




    Doc turns and awkwardly smiles at Linda.​





    DOC


    Nice to meet you Miss Mcfly.




    Linda feels nervous.​





    LINDA


    Sure.





    MARTY


    Doc there's something....




    Doc interrupts Marty.​





    DOC


    So this is 2015. How's Jennifer?





    MARTY


    About that....




    Doc interrupts again.​





    DOC


    Did you have a successful Music Career?





    MARTY


    Doc?





    DOC


    I seem to remember you mentioning a Hover Conversion on your second visit to 1955. Is there really flying Cars in this time period?





    MARTY


    Doc just shut up at minute!




    Doc is stunned by Marty's outburst and freezes.​





    MARTY


    Doc. The future has changed. For the worst.




    Marty takes out DOC'S LETTER FROM 1915 and


    shows it to his Earlier Counterpart.​





    MARTY


    And if we don't fix it. We could a Paradox.




    Doc fears the worst.


    Linda is curious by what her father has in his possession.











     
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    EXT. LYONS ESTATE.





    EXT. DOC BROWN.





    Doc is gobsmacked by the contents of the letter his 1915 counterpart had wrote.


    He puts his hand over his mouth. The events written in the revelation, is yet to

    be experienced by the 1985 version of Doc.




    EXT. MARTY MCFLY.





    Marty watches Doc's reaction to the letter.




    MARTY


    I know this is heavy.





    DOC


    So there is a problem with the Earth's Gravitational in the future.




    EXT. LINDA MCFLY.





    Linda frowns at Doc's quote confused.​





    LINDA


    What?




    Doc hesitates and clears his head.





    DOC


    Never mind.


    (Doc turns to face Marty and Linda).


    My God Marty. This is horrendous. What a complicated scenario my future counterpart got involved with.




    Marty paces himself towards Doc anxiously.​





    MARTY


    But, Doc. This has ruined my life. I can understand your otherselfs decision to prevent a potential Global Disaster, but it's a decision which has created a chain of events that has been a personal disaster for me and my daughter. This new scenario, could be the start of the end of the Universe, if we don't fix this.





    DOC


    Marty, I am so sorry. It's so sad to see you this way.





    MARTY


    It's not easy. The Parkinsons has been difficult. Losing my sister was a shock and Jennifer..... I mean it's strange that one event change, can have an effect on so many different outcomes. Advanced Technology in Security, Healthcare and Global Science that doesn't exist, because they weren't inspired, to create it, unlike what I witnessed in the 2015 we saw, when I was seventeen.




    Doc puts his hands on Marty's arm tenderly.​





    DOC


    I wish there was something I could do.





    MARTY


    You can. ....


    Let's go back.







    Linda wonders what her fathers suggesting.​





    LINDA


    Back where?





    MARTY


    1985.




    Doc gasps. He doesn't think its a good idea.​








    MARTY


    Doc, Biff is dead. The events leading up to you going back to 1885 are in jeopardy. We need to fix this. If Biff dies, you may not have a future in the past Doc. You asked me to save the Space Time Continuum in your letter. I want to see my sister....and my wife again. I miss Jennifer so much and knowing she died in such horrible circumstances, makes me even more determined.




    Doc puts his hands on Marty's arms tenderly seeing how upset he is.​





    DOC


    You are serious about this aren't you?





    MARTY


    I've never been more determined than anything else. Apart from getting my parents together, getting the Almanac off Biff and saving your life twice.





    DOC


    Then I'd be happy to help.




    Marty smiles.​





    MARTY


    You're the Doc, Doc.





    DOC


    Right, lets get going.




    Doc rushes to the time machine ready to refuel the Plutonium Chamber.​








    LINDA


    Wait!





    Doc and Marty acknwledge Linda's call out.





    LINDA


    Got room for one more?




    Doc and Marty look at each other. Marty didn't really want to tag Linda along.


    However, she is involved now. Marty pulls a face.​




    EXT. DMC DELOREAN TIME MACHINE.





    A few minutes later, Doc is seen refuelling the PLUTONIUM CHAMBER with Pellets.


    Doc is wearing his RADIATION HELMET and Marty too is in his YELLOW RADIATION SUIT


    AND HELMET. Linda is stood further down the road, to keep away from any potential danger.


    Doc finishes refuelling and removes his helmet.​





    DOC


    Safe now. Everythings Letlined.




    Marty removes his helmet and gives his daughter a thumbs up.


    Linda walks back towards the Delorean.




    LINDA


    What is that you just put into the car?





    MARTY


    Plutonium.




    Linda is shocked.





    LINDA


    Are you telling that this sucker is Nuclear?





    DOC


    No, this sucker is electrical. But, I need a Nuclear Reaction to generate the 1.21 Jigawatts of electricity I need.





    LINDA


    Jesus.




    INT. DMC DELOREAN TIME MACHINE.





    DOC BROWN.


    MARTY MCFLY.


    LINDA MCFLY​




    EINSTEIN. Doc's Dog.




    They are preparing to head back to 1985.





    The date: "Monday October 28th 1985 3:00 am is tapped into the keypad.




    DOC


    We can't stop my other self from stopping the Libyan Nationalists destroying Los Angeles. We'll be an accessory to Genocide.





    MARTY


    I'm not talking about stopping your other self. I was thinking of influencing a good friend of mine.




    Doc raises his eyebrow.





    MARTY


    Goldie Wilson II




    Doc shakes his head in dismay​





    DOC


    Marty...





    MARTY


    Please Doc. If not for me....




    Linda looks to her Dad and smiles. Then she looks to Doc, hoping he will accept the mission.​





    LINDA


    Please, Doctor Brown. I miss my Mom.







    MOMENTS LATER THE DELOREAN IS FACING DOWN LYONS ESTATE.​





    LINDA


    So how fast does this sucker have to go before we either end up in another time zone or get blown up?





    MARTY


    Uh..





    DOC


    When this baby hit Eighty Eight miles per hour, you're gonna see some serious shit.




    Einstein barks. Linda is nervous.​





    LINDA


    On seconds thoughts, I'd like to get OUUUT!




    Doc hits the Gas and speeds off down into Lyons Estate.





    35.....





    45....



    55.....





    Linda holds onto her father tightly, as the Cul- de -sac is soon coming to an end. A tree is seen in the distance.


    Linda is terrified.​





    LINDA


    Um Doctor Brown. I don't think you have enough road to get up to Eighty Eight.




    65....





    75....





    85.....








    88....





    THE DELOREAN HITS EIGHTY EIGHT MILES PER HOUR. THE FLUXCIPACITOR LIGHTS UP


    AND TEMPORAL DISPLACEMENT OCCURS SENDING THEM BACK TO 1985, LEAVING A PAIR OF


    FIRE TRAILS BEHIND.
















     
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    Monday


    October 28


    1985


    03:00 a.m.





    LYONS ESTATE. DARK.







    INT. MCFLY RESIDENCE.





    INT. LORRAINE BAINES MCFLY.





    Lorraine is seen going into the Kitchen in her night clothes. She takes out a Glass


    and turns on the faucet and fills up the glass with water.​




    SUDDENLY, THREE SUPER SONIC BOOMS ARE HEARD AND THREE FLASHES OF LIGHT ARE SEEN FROM OUTSIDE!





    Lorraine jumps out of her skins, screaming. She drops the glass on the floor in fright.





    EXT. LYONS ESTATE.​




    EXT. DMC DELOREAN TIME MACHINE.





    The Delorean Time Machine appears and spins around in the street and avoids


    colliding with a Street Light at the end of the Cul De Sac. The Vehicle comes to a stop


    and is frozen. The Gullwing door flips open.​




    EXT. MARTY MCFLY.





    Marty jumps out of the Time Vehicle.





    EXT. LINDA MCFLY.​




    Followed by his panicked daughter, who feels dizzy by her


    brief journey to the past.




    LINDA


    Jesus! I've been on Rides at the Fair, less breath taking than that.





    MARTY


    Well, it won't be your last.




    Linda catches her breath.





    EXT. DOC BROWN.





    Doc Brown gets out of the Delorean.





    EXT. EINSTEIN.





    His Dog follows suit.





    Marty looks to his surroundings.​





    MARTY


    Did we make it? Are we back?


    (to Doc)


    Doc also looks to his surroundings.


    DOC


    We're back.




    Linda wipes her forehead, relieved the Journey has ended...for now.


    Linda is curious.​





    LINDA


    Back where? What year is this?





    DOC


    Monday October 28th 1985.




    Linda approaches her father.





    LINDA


    Daddy, what do you think this Goldie Wilson II can do to help our future?





    MARTY


    From what I remember from Doc's future Counterpart, the one that I last saw ride off in a Time Train....





    LINDA


    He had a Time Train?!


    (loudly)




    Marty is annoyed that Linda raises her voice and calms her.​





    MARTY


    Shh. Keep your voice down. Yeah, but thats not important right now.


    Goldie Wilsons heirs followed him into Government work and because of the Terrorist attack on L.A. in a previous timeline, they advanced technology to keep the World safe from terrorism, viruses, found health cures and eventually kept the World Clean, which coincided with the future I saw when I was a teenager. Because Doc prevented the Libyans attack, the timeline was altered creating a chain reaction, which ultimately lead to the tragic deaths of your Mother and your Aunt.


    (Marty then turns to Doc's 1985 self)


    Doc, I know you can be abjective to this. But, even this has proven you have given into finding and rectifying future events.


    DOC


    I guess we are more alike than you think.




    Marty smiles.


    Linda is shivers and rubs her arms as she starts to feel cold.​





    LINDA


    What time is it?




    Marty checks his watch.​





    MARTY


    It's just past three in the morning.




    Linda pulls a face.





    LINDA


    We're early for this Rendezvous aren't we?




    Doc paces himself towards Marty and Linda and nods.​





    DOC


    Precisley. We didn't want to arrive at a point, where the Delorean is observed by a mass.




    Linda shrugs.​





    LINDA


    No, I guess not. But, what do we do in the mean time, before this Goldie whats his name is operational?





    DOC


    Well, first we need to refuel the Plutonium Chamber before we set off. We don't want any mishaps during our brief stay. The attempt on Los Angeles will occur later this afternoon and I'm sure Marty will want to convince Mr Wilson, that the threat is real enough, for him to advance the future Marty saw originally.




    Marty gives Doc a thumbs up.​





    MARTY


    Right.




    Einstein barks.​





    DOC


    Hush. Einstein.





    LINDA


    Right. I'll let you boys refuel this sucker up, while I make my scarce for a moment. Don't wanna get Radiation Poisoning.




    Linda walks off shivering a little.​





    MARTY


    Don't wander too far honey.




    EXT. MCFLY HOUSEHOLD.





    EXT. LORRAINE BAINES MCFLY.





    Lorraine exits the house holding a Torch Light.​








    LORRAINE


    Who is making such a torrid noise at three 'O Clock in the morning?


    (to herself annoyed)




    Lorraibe gets to the edge of the Driveway.


    She spots the Delorean Time Machine and her face drops, when she sees to unidentified


    persons in refuelling the Plutonium Chamber. One is in a White Radiation Suit, the other


    in Yellow. She blinks hard twice to make sure she is not seeing things.​





    LORRAINE


    What on Earth?




    EXT. LINDA MCFLY





    Linda is then seen walking beside the house. Lorraine approaches her.


    It appears Linda has strayed too far form Marty and Doc.​





    LORRAINE


    Oh my God sweetheart are you alright?




    Linda is caught off guard.​





    LINDA


    Grandma?


    (gasps)




    Lorraine is confused.​





    LORRAINE


    Grandma?




    Linda is stuck for words, as she is faced with her Grandmother, who is


    thirty years younger, than her 2015 counterpart. She is put on the spot.




    LINDA


    I mean - what Lorraine? Shit.





    LORRAINE


    You know my name.




    Linda has put her foot in it.​





    LINDA


    I mean No Ma'am. I mean yes Ma'am.




    EXT. MARTY MCFLY.





    EXT. DOC BROWN.​




    Doc and Marty finish refueling the Delorean Chamber.​





    MARTY


    Safe?





    DOC


    Letlined.




    Marty pulls back his Radiation Helmet. He puffs his cheeks.​





    MARTY


    Perfect.




    Doc secures the Plutonium Case into the Trunk.


    Marty looks around and panics, where he cannot see Linda.​





    MARTY


    Doc, where's Linda?




    Doc too worries.​





    DOC


    Great Scott!


    We can't have her wondering around and risking events, like you did in 1955.




    Something then catches Marty's eye. A Torch Light.


    He notices the shadow of two persons in conversation.


    Marty suspects Linda is talking to one of his family members.​





    MARTY


    Doc. Look.





    DOC


    Get in.




    Lorraine is wondering, why Linda is so frightened, evasive and how she knows her name.​





    LORRAINE


    You look terrified sweetheart. Does it have to do with them weird people at the end of the street?





    LINDA


    No!





    LORRAINE


    They've brought harm to you haven't they?




    Lorraine attempts to coax Linda inside the house. Linda backs away denying Lorraines theory.​





    LINDA


    No, Grandma!





    LORRAINE


    Why? Why, do you keep calling me Grandma?




    The Delorean carrying Marty, Doc and Einstein comes to a stop right outside the house.


    Linda turns and Lorraine freezes. The Gullwing door flips open and Marty and Doc's Radiations Helmets


    are placed over their heads. Einstein barks. Lorraine grabs Linda's arm.​





    LORRAINE


    Come inside.




    Linda hesitates for a moment.​





    MARTY


    Linda get in!





    Linda looks to her Grandmother momentarily.





    LINDA


    I'm sorry.




    Linda dashes into the Delorean Time Machine and it speeds off down the street and out of Lyons Estate.


    Lorraine is horrified.​





    LORRAINE


    Oh my God. That poor girl. She's been kidnapped.


    I have to alert authorities right away. How did she know my name?


    (to herself)




















     
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    October 28


    1985


    0:6:01 a.m.




    EXT. HILL VALLEY.


    SUNRISE.





    INT. DERELICT SIGHT.


    On The Outskirts of town.​




    INT. DMC DELOREAN TIME MACHINE.


    The Gullwing doors fly open.





    EXT DELOREAN. DOC BROWN.


    Doc Brown appears out of the time vehicle stretching and yawning.



    INT. DELOREAN. MARTY MCFLY. LINDA MCFLY. EINSTEIN


    Marty and Linda are sleeping, with Einstein sleeping across them.





    Doc sees them sleeping, realizing, how exhausting they are, having to deal with


    their recent trip back to 1985. He then starts to wander the deserted building.


    Marty then awakes and causiously tries not to wake Linda.​




    EXT. DELOREAN.


    Marty rubs his eyes and follows Doc.


    Doc turns.




    DOC


    I didn't want to wake you. You were sleeping so peacefully.





    MARTY


    It's kind of hard to get shut eye any way. What with all recent happenings.





    DOC


    I'm sure the return trip to 1985 with bring a bit of Nostaligia for you.




    Marty sighs.​





    MARTY


    I guess. But, it's the future I'm concerned about.




    Doc thinks for a moment, rubbing his chin.​





    DOC


    Marty, I know how much you want to save your future. But, we only have one shot at what you're trying to rectify. It's still dangerous for the Space Time Continuum.





    MARTY


    And so was the warning, your future counterpart sent in his letter.





    DOC


    But, how can we guarantee events will happen as before, leading to my journey to 1885? How can we expect Biff not to have a heart attack in another altered time line.




    Marty scratches his head anxiously and begins to get agitated.​





    MARTY


    It's a risk, we'll have to take.





    DOC


    There has to be other alternatives.




    Marty is up in arms.​





    MARTY


    Like what?




    Doc is out of ideas.​





    DOC


    I -I..I don't know. Even with my scientific knowledge. I'm out of ideas on this one.




    Marty kicks a metal chair over in frustration.​





    MARTY


    I can't believe you stealing that Plutonium off the Libyan's was a Chain Reaction that could destroy everything I experienced on that October weekend. Not only that, it's taken away those I love most.




    Doc looks at the floor and then his eyes look up at Marty feeling guilty.​





    DOC


    I feel terrible Marty. And I'm from the contents of my future selfs letter, so does he. But, if I was in his shoes, I'd have done exactly done the same thing for L.A.




    Marty feels sad and turns his back for a moment, still grieving for Jennifer.​





    DOC


    Marty?





    MARTY


    Doc, I have to do this.




    Doc places his hand on Marty's shoulder.​





    DOC


    I got you into this mess. I'll get you out of this. I'll face Goldie Wilson II myself.




    Marty is stunned by Doc's offer and turns swiftly.​





    MARTY


    Doc?




    Doc interrupts Marty.​





    DOC


    Marty, learning of my fate in both 1985 and 1885 has made me realize, you mean as much to me as if you were my own son. I will make sure we succeed in this mission and save the future.





    MARTY


    What if we don't succeed?





    DOC


    We must succeed.




    Marty then realizes.​





    MARTY


    You know I was thinking. Since the terrorists wanted you to build them that bomb and you instead gave them Pinball Machine Parts. How did they manage to get the nescessary knowledge to eventually build a nuke without yours or anybody else's aid?





    DOC


    Maybe they stole more Plutonium.





    MARTY


    Doc. You are a Scientist and you took the Plutonium for the Delorean. You betrayed them and after the arrest of the two at the Mall, their accomplices intended to retaliate. Now in order for them to require a Bomb built, they would have needed the assistance of another source, since they had no knowledge of how to assemble a Nuclear Bomb.




    Doc puts his hands to his mouth and gasps. He realizes Marty could be right.​





    DOC


    Great Scott Marty. You're absolutely right. Either somebody in their Cell knew how to assemble a weapon of mass destruction or....





    MARTY


    Somebody with Scientific knowledge built them the Bomb.





    DOC


    Let's not forget either. The events of you accidently ending up in 1955 in the first place, because of the Terrorists, occurred on the previous Saturday in this Timeline. How on Earth did they manage to get a Weapon so deadly active in such short time?





    MARTY


    And how quickly could they find somebody?





    DOC


    My God. There could possibly a traitor to the country. Who in another Timeline was an accomplice in Mass Murder.





    MARTY


    Whoa this is getting really heavy Doc.

    Doc is confused.​


    DOC


    Heavy. Heavy. Heavy. What has weight got to do with it?




    Suddenly a tired voice is heard.





    EXT. DELOREAN. LINDA MCFLY.





    She rubs her eyes and yawns.


    Einstein hops out of the time vehicle too.





    LINDA


    Speaking of weight. I need breakfast, before I lose some.





    Both Marty and Doc puff their cheeks.























     
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    Monday


    October 28 1985.


    7:45 a.m.




    INT. MCFLY HOUSEHOLD.





    INT. LORRAINE BAINES MCFLY.​




    Lorraine is on the phone and talking to her daughter Linda Mcfly.​








    LORRAINE


    I'm so glad you had a good night with Greg...sorry Craig.




    While she continues to speak on the phone, she peers through the curtains. From her POV she sees Marty's 4X4 leaving




    LORRAINE


    No, Marty has just left for school and is probably gonna pick Jennifer up on the way - What's that sweetheart?




    Lorraine closes the curtain and Stands by the receiver.​





    LORRAINE


    Apparently, his agent was so impressed, he wants your father to consider a Franchise. And of course there's Marty being a success with the Record Company and all. Things are really working out fine....You know I don't know what came over him. Like on Saturday Morning when he passed out and thought the car had been wrecked - and yesterday when he showed up dressed like Clint Eastwood....Why would he have been nervous taking Jennifer to the Lake. That's if he did go to the lake....





    (Lorraine tuts).


    Linda that would be crossing the line. I wouldn't want to ask him stuff - you know, in that department. Like I wouldn't ask you stuff about..what you do. So, what did you and Craig get up to last night?





    (pulls a face)


    OK, I think I get the hint. Well, if you're not working too late at the Boutique tonight, maybe you can invite him round later for dinner...





    (awkward face)


    or Greg. No, your father is out back getting rid of some Autumn leaves. It's starting to look like the Amazon out there. OK ,Sweetheart. Love you too. Bye.




    Lorraine places the phone down. Lorraine laughs a little to herself. Lorraine heads down the hallway.​




    INT. MARTY'S ROOM.





    Lorraine enters her sons room and finds it looking pretty messy. She starts pick up loose clothing off


    of the floor.​




    INT. PICTURE.





    The Photograph of Marty and Doc stood next to the Construction of the Clocktower on September 5th 1885 is revealed.



    Lorraine pauses and takes interest. She picks it up and finds it rather fascinating. She looks what it reads.​





    LORRAINE


    Friend In Time. Must be a Wild West Retro Fancy Dress.


    (to herself)


    (She then looks at her watch)


    Can't be late for breakfast with Babs.




    Lorraine places the Photograph neately on Marty's side cabinet.​




    EXT. LYONS ESTATE





    EXT. MCFLY HOUSEHOLD.





    Lorraine is heard calling to George.​








    LORRAINE (O.S.).


    Bye honey.




    EXT. LORRAINE.





    Lorraine hurries out of the house and to the mail box.



    EXT. HILL VALLEY TELEGRAPH.





    Local Newspaper.





    Lorraine unfolds it.​




    The Headline reads. "AUTHORITIES UNSURE ON MALL SHOOTOUT. "Terrorists Captured."


    Lorraine is rather shook by the report.​





    LORRAINE


    Heavy.




    She then quickly turns another page, where she finds another headline.​




    "DELOREAN WRECK FOUND ON EASTWOOD RAVINE. "Police seek Cowboy in Car Abandonment."





    Lorraine laughs a little.​





    LORRAINE


    Heavier


    (Lorraine then has a realization)


    Cowboy?


    (she goes into denial)


    No Lorraine, that's just stupid.




    INT. CAR.





    Lorraine gets into the car to start her journey.



    EXT. CAR.





    The car leaves the driveway.





    EXT. LYONS ESTATE.​




    The Mcfly car is seen exiting the Estate.​






































     
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    Monday


    October 28th 1985.


    8:24 a.m.

    EXT. HILL VALLEY TIME SQUARE. 1985.





    CLEAR SUNNY MORNING.




    "THE POWER OF LOVE," BY HUEY LEWIS PLAYS INTO THE SCENE.​





    THE CAMERA PANS AROUND THE TOWN SQUARE. IT LOOKS MUCH LIKE SEEN AT THE BEGINNING OF PART I.


    THE COURTHOUSE ISSHOWN, WITH THE CLOCKTOWER REMAINING AT 10:04.PM


    LOU'S AEROBICS GYM IS SHOWN WITH LADIES DOING THEIR GYNASTICS. TEXACO GARAGE.


    THE FRONT ENTRANCE OF THE THEATRE NEAR THE REAR LEFT OF THE COURTHOUSE IS BEING REVAMPED DUE TO​

    MARTY CRASHING INTO IT IN HIS RETURN FROM 1955, NEAR THE END OF PART I.








    THE CAMERA MOVES AWAY AND TO THE FAR RIGHT OF THE COURTHOUSE.


    TO AN ALLEYWAY.​




    EXT. DMC DELOREAN.


    The Time Vehicle is then seen hidden inside an Alley. The Gullwing door flies open.





    EXT. DOC BROWN.


    Doc now appears in a diguise. He is now wearing a brown suit and bow tie and wearing thin round glasses.



    EXT. EINSTEIN





    Along with his pet companion.





    EXT. MARTY MCFLY.​




    Marty then steps out of the Time Machine.





    EXT. LINDA MCFLY.





    Followed by his daughter Linda.​




    Marty slowly walks towards the opening of the Alleyway and starts to feel Nostalgic, when he briefly catches a glimpse of his past.


    Doc calls out to him.​





    DOC


    Marty? Not the best time to take a recap tour. We're on a tight schedule.




    Marty pauses for a moment, before retreating back to the Delorean.​





    MARTY


    Sorry Doc. I keep forgetting 1985 is not my present anyway.




    Linda notices how smart Doc is. She chuckles a little.​





    LINDA


    Can't believe you had the guts to steal clothes off other peoples Laundry Lines.




    Doc straightens his Jacket.​





    DOC


    Can't risk going into town right now. Especially if I'm under investigation for the Plutonium Theft.





    MARTY


    So, what now? How do you convince the Mayors son to believe that the terrorist threat is real enough, to inspire him to alter the future.




    Doc feels awkward for a moment. Marty waits anxiously for Doc's answer.​





    DOC


    I'm gonna tell him...




    Doc starts to become nervous, like he's forgotten how to work the events.


    Marty is unsettled by Doc's hesitation and wonders if Doc is having second thoughts.




    MARTY


    Yeah what?





    DOC


    Marty, I'm gonna have to play the bad guy for this one.




    Linda doesn't like the sound of Doc's idea. She's shakes her head and laughs sarcastically.​





    LINDA


    I knew it. You chickened.




    Doc immediately assures Linda, it's not the case.​





    DOC


    No, no, no, no. I haven't. What I mean't was I'm gonna have to risk implicating myself in hope they will believe the Libyans are going use that weapon in Los Angeles.





    MARTY


    Doc, that's nuts. You do that and it's the end of the World.





    DOC


    Not nescessarily.


    (Doc glances at his watch)


    In five minutes, a meeting will be held at the Courthouse. Goldie Wilson will be there and from what I read in the paper, so will his scientist son.





    MARTY


    How do you know that?





    DOC


    That's when and where their formal and regular meetings occur.




    Doc proceeds to the trunk of the car and lifts it up.​




    EXT. METAL CASE.





    Doc opens it up.





    EXT. YELLOW PLUTONIUM CASE.




    MARTY


    Why do I get the feeling, you're gonna do something seriously risky?





    DOC


    Trust me Marty.




    Linda puts her hands on her hips.​





    LINDA


    So what's your plan?




    Doc taps his nose with his finger.​















     
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    EXT. HILL VALLEY TOWN SQUARE.

    "TAKE ON ME" BY A 'HA IS HEARD PLAYING AT LOU'S AEROBICS GYM.

    Town Folk are seen gathering outside the Courthouse.

    EXT. 1984 BWB 733I.

    Georges borrowed car is seen driven into the Courthouse Parking Lot.

    INT. LORRAINE BAINES MCFLY.

    Lorraine parks the car up.

    EXT. LORRAINE.

    She exits the vehicle. As she does another vehicle appears into the parking lot.

    EXT. LIMOSINE.​
    The Limo comes to a stop.

    EXT. CHAUFFUER.

    The driver in a dark suit and wearing a hat appears and walks to the rear passenger door and opens it.

    EXT. MAYOR GOLDIE WILSON

    The Mayor of Hill Valley exits.

    EXT. GOLDIE WILSON II.

    He son follows on behind.

    The Mayor acknowledges the public.
    MAYOR WILSON

    Morning everybody. Beautiful morning isn't it?
    His son waves to the locals.

    GOLDIE WILSON II

    Hello.
    The mayor spots Lorraine and smiles, greeting her.​

    MAYOR WILSON

    Good morning Mrs Mcfly. Tell your husband I will look forward to reading his first Novel.

    LORRAINE

    Thank you. I hope you enjoy the read.

    Both and Lorraine and Goldie Wilson II exchange greetings.
    As the mayor is about to head inside a familiar loud, yet excited voice heard.​

    BIFF (O.S.).

    Mr Mayor. Mr Mayor.
    EXT. BIFF TANNEN.

    Biff Tannen, aged 47, rushes into the parking lot to alert the Mayor. He is dressed in an

    Adidas blue Track Suit. He wore a Green one on the Saturday and a Green one on the Sunday.

    Lorraine rolls her eyes at Biff's foolishness. Both the mayor and his son pull a face, but reluctantly

    acknowledge the local idiot.​

    MAYOR WILSON

    Morning Mr Tannen. What can I do for you today?

    BIFF

    Would you like two Coats of wax on your car today Mr Mayor?

    MAYOR WILSON

    Mr Tannen, it's not really my car. Why don't you ask my Chauffeur?Anyway, I may consider alternatives in the future, since you seem to only do half a job.

    Biff then appears to lose himself.

    BIFF

    Hey Butthead! What do mean...?

    Biff contains himself.
    Wilson II is upset by Biff's outburst.​

    GOLDIE WILSON II

    What did you call my Dad?
    The mayor pulls on his sons arm and calms him.​

    MAYOR WILSON

    Son, the meeting.
    Wilson II calms down.​

    GOLDIE WILSON II

    Sorry. Lets get inside.
    The Mayor and his son turn and start walking towards the the Entrance to the Courthouse. The crowd follows.​
    EXT. DOC BROWN.

    Doc Brown in his disguise is amongst the crowd and follows inside.

    EXT. BRIEFCASE.

    He is holding a Briefcase, containing the Plutonium his stole from the Libyans.

    Biff is embarrassed by his outburst. Lorraine shakes her head at him, with her arms folded. His actions caused a scene.​

    LORRAINE

    Biff Tannen, you know how to make an impression don't you?

    (sarcastically)
    Biff feels stupid and shrugs. She turns to grab her purse out of the car, when something catches her eye.

    EXT. DMC DELOREAN.

    From her POV she spots the Time Machine parked in the Alley. Biff suspects something is up.
    BIFF

    You OK Mrs Mcfly? (O.S.).

    Lorraine hesitates and then grabs her purse and locks up her car. She then spins round and feels Biff is somewhat annoying her.

    LORRAINE

    Yes, I'm fine Biff. And before you ask, no I don't want my car waxing. You've already been over twice this weekend.
    Biff nervously chuckles.​

    BIFF

    OK, no problem Mrs Mcfly. Laters.
    Biff turns abruptly and accidently bumps into the local Bum and former Mayor.​

    EXT. RED THOMAS.

    He grasps a Bottle Of Whiskey. His is very disgruntled.

    RED THOMAS.

    Watch where you going. Crazy Drunk Pedestrian!
    Biff laugh stupidly and waves.​

    BIFF

    Morning Red.
    Biff rushes to his Pick Up Truck and leaves the scene. Red looks to the Courthouse and spits and stumbles away.

    Lorraine again turns to face the Alley opposite. She finds the car familiar.

    INT. COURTHOUSE.

    INT. MEETING ROOM.

    The public along enter a large seated area, for the public. A stand with a Table and Chairs for the Local Council is opposite.

    INT. MAYOR GOLDIE WILSON.​
    INT. WILSON II.

    The Mayor and his son walk into the room and to the Stand.

    The locals take their seats.

    INT. DOC BROWN.

    Doc in disguise, cautiously enters the meeting Room, gripping the Briefcase tightly. He takes a seat at the very back of the room, next to a

    man in his mid sixties. The man looks at Doc very oddly and it seems he knows him. Doc senses the man is staring at him and his eyes glance at him

    nervously and hopes to not cause a distraction. The man leans towards Doc.​

    MAN

    Emmett Brown?

    (whispers)
    Doc freezes looking to the front. He knows the man is talking to him, but keeps his composure.​

    DOC

    Who?

    (whispers)

    They continue to whsiper.

    MAN

    It is you. I can't believe it.
    Doc denies he is who he says he is​

    DOC

    Sorry sir, but you have me confused with somebody else.
    The man is not fooled.​

    MAN

    Nice try old buddy. But that disguise doesn't fool me.
    Doc faces the mystery man.​

    DOC

    Do I know you?
    The man seems surprised.​

    MAN

    Do you know me? My dear old chap - we went to college together. It's me - your old buddy - Ronald Harris.
    Doc takes a moment to recognize the familiar face and his eyes light up.​

    DOC

    Why of course. Ronald.

    The two shake hands.

    DOC

    It's been a long time.
    Ronald chuckles.​

    RONALD

    Sure has my friend.

    DOC

    I haven't seen you in what..? Twenty Three years.

    RONALD

    Has it been that long?

    DOC

    What happened to you? I thought you were living in Minnesota.
    Ronald thinks for a moment.​

    RONALD

    Oh, you know. Got home sick. Missed this old place. I suppose hiding away for numerous years does make you lonely.
    Doc somewhat feels awkward. He glances at the case and holds it up against his chest.​

    DOC

    I thought you got married.
    Ronalds then looks slighly smug and feels uncomfortable by Doc's suggestion.​

    RONALD

    I did. But it didn't work out.

    (his eyes catch the Briefcase)

    Must be important to you, whatever is in that Briefcase. The way you're holding on it.
    Doc doesn't answer straight away and watches the Mayor and his workforce prepare for the meeting. Doc plays along.​

    DOC

    Yes, it is actually.
    Doc thinks for a moment and comes to a realization and looks to his Briefcase once more.​

    DOC

    Ronald can you do me do favour?
     
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    EXT. HILL VALLEY TOWN SQUARE.



    INT. ALLEYWAY.



    EXT. DMC DELOREAN TIME MACHINE.



    EXT. MARTY MCFLY.



    Marty paces up and the down anxious. He keeps checking his watch.



    INT. DELOREAN.



    Linda Mcfly is petting Einstein and watches her father look really nervous.



    EXT. LINDA MCFLY.


    Linda gets out the Time Vehicle and tries to reassure him.



    LINDA


    Dad relax. Doc seems to know what he's doing.​



    MARTY


    I hope you're right Lin. Otherwise you can forget your dream future


    LINDA


    Dad, I'm not interested in the recreating a timeline where there's Flying Cars and Hoverboards. All I'm concerned about, is whether I get to see my mother again.



    Marty turns and hugs his daughter. He smiles feeling a little emotional.



    MARTY


    Yeah me too.​



    Linda puffs and rubs her stomach.





    LINDA


    You know what I can't stand this anymore. I'm starving.





    Linda proceeds to exit the Alley, but Marty attempts to intercept her.





    MARTY


    Linda are you crazy. We can't distrupt the Space Time Continuum. It could create all sorts of problems.





    LINDA


    What do you want me to do, starve to death?





    MARTY


    We'll wait until Doc succeeds in his mission and when we return to 2015, we'll have dinner as a family.




    Linda is feeling frustrated.​





    LINDA


    He might be in there for hours.





    MARTY


    Linda....




    Linda defies him and storms out of the Alley. Marty tries to grab her.​




    EXT. TOWN SQUARE.





    EXT. LORRAINE.





    Lorraine is about to walk in the direction of LOU'S AEROBICS GYM, when she hears a commotion.​





    MARTY (O.S.).


    Linda get back here now!





    LINDA


    I am hungry! (O.S.).




    Lorraine sees Linda running out of the Alley and a Male trying to pull her back in. Linda shouts out loud.​





    LINDA


    Let me go!





    MARTY


    Cmon, you'll cause a scene.




    Lorraine finds the girl familar and realizes that the Delorean she thought she saw in the Alley, is the


    same one she saw outside her home at 3:00 a.m. She nods with her suspicions.




    LORRAINE


    I thought so.




    INT. ALLEYWAY.





    Marty has lost his patience and is angry.​





    MARTY


    Do want this whole mission to go sour?





    LINDA


    No of course. But I feel nauseus and I need to eat and drink.





    MARTY


    But, anything could happen to you out there.





    LINDA


    Do as I say not as I do, huh?




    Marty frowns.​





    MARTY


    What?





    LINDA


    I bet you were more stubborn than I was, when you were a teenager.




    That comment offends Marty.​





    MARTY


    Actually, young lady.....




    Marty has no come back. Linda sarcastically laughs.​





    LINDA


    Thought so. I getting me some food.




    Linda brazenly tries to get past her father, but he tries to restrain and they scuffle. Suddenly, Marty is hit on the head and falls to ground.​




    EXT. LORRAINE.





    Lorraine appears to have floored Marty with a Hair Brush. Linda is shocked.


    Linda is shocked.​





    LINDA


    Grandma!




    Lorraine grips Linda's shoulder and reassures her.​





    LORRAINE


    It's alright. I'll keep you safe.


    (she looks to the floor)


    And as for you, you....




    Marty is seen sitting up looking fairly groggy. Lorraine recognizes the male she floor with her bag.


    She is stunned by the identity of the man she assaulted.




    LORRAINE


    Calvin?




    Marty looks up.


    Linda pulls a face.




    LINDA


    Calvin?




    Marty gasps.​





    MARTY


    Mom!





    LORRAINE


    Calvin. Marty. It's me Lorraine.




    Linda then has a realization about the story behind Calvin Klein, the man who got George and Lorraine together on November 12th 1955. She gives her father a shocking stare.​





    LINDA


    Wait a minute you're Calvin Klein. That explains....




    Marty stops Linda from revealing anymore and quickly gets to his feet holding his head.​





    MARTY


    That explains, why you shouldn't defy your father. You could have got me into serious trouble.




    Lorraine is apologetic for over reacting.​





    LORRAINE


    Oh Calvin I'm sorry. That poor head of yours.




    Marty feels a little pain as he rubs his head.​





    MARTY


    I'm used to it by now.




    Lorraine remembers Marty mentioning being a father and looks at Linda.​





    LINDA


    Wait a minute this is your daughter?




    Marty tries to compose himself feeling woozy.​





    MARTY


    Yeah.




    Lorraine holds her hand out for a handshake.​





    LORRAINE


    I'm Lorraine.




    Linda smiles and shakes her future Grandmothers hand.​





    LINDA


    Linda.





    LORRAINE


    Aww, I've got a daughter called Linda.




    Then emotions run high, as tears come to Linda's eyes and Marty starts to notice. Linda was named after her late Aunt in the Timeline she grew up in.​





    LINDA


    I know.




    Linda places her hand on her Lorraine shoulders and almost bursts out crying. Lorraine feels concerned.​





    LORRAINE


    Oh, sweetheart are you OK?





    LINDA


    Yeah. You look so beautiful.




    Lorraine is appreciative.​





    LORRAINE


    Thank you. I try my best.


    (she then turns to Marty)


    So, what else has Calvin Klein or Marty been up to since the Enchantment Under The Sea Dance? It's been thirty years. Must surely been evenful?




    Marty is stumped.​




    EXT. EINSTEIN.





    Einstein runs over to Lorraine and she is pets him.​





    LORRAINE


    Oh puppy. Isn't he beautiful. This is your Uncles Dog. Einstein.




    Marty nervously nods.​





    MARTY


    ...Uh yeah.





    LORRAINE


    I thought he looked familar. Have you come to visit Doctor Brown.





    MARTY


    Yeah, but a' nobody's home.





    LORRAINE


    Marty's been really worried about him. Not seen him in a week. My son that is. Very thoughtful of you coming by to check on him and take care of his dog.




    Lorraine then looks at the Delorean. She finds it rather interesting.​





    LORRAINE


    Quite a familar sight. Is this the one I saw last night?




    Both Marty and Linda feel awkward.​





    LINDA


    Maybe. About that Lorraine.....





    Lorraine interrupts.





    LORRAINE


    It said in the Newspaper, that a Delorean was found near Hilldale, smashed up.




    Marty tenses.​





    MARTY


    No, really?





    LORRAINE


    Weird. Biff claimed to have seen a flying Delorean outside the house on Saturday Morning. But, he's rather an oddball these days.





    MARTY


    Biff? Is that the asshole that I made crash into a Manure Truck?




    Both Lorraine and Linda laugh.​





    LINDA


    My God Dad, sounds like you were a rebel back then.




    Lorraine glances back at the Delorean.​





    LORRAINE


    Do mind if I check this out? I mean inside? People say this is an unreliable car, but something has drawn me to it.




    Marty gulps.​





    MARTY


    Perfect.















































     
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    INT. HILL VALLEY COURTHOUSE.





    INT. MEETING ROOM.





    INT. MAYOR GOLDIE WILSON​




    Mayor Wilson is updating the public.





    INT. GOLDIE WILSON II





    His son lends his support, alongside other Politians.




    MAYOR WILSON


    Thankfully, these terrorists will pose no threat to us any longer.




    A member of the public raises their hands and the Mayor Acknowledges.​





    MAYOR


    Yes sir?





    LOCAL (O.S.).


    Mr Mayor, why were they at Lone Pine Mall?


    MAYOR


    I cannot discuss any of that information right now. But, as far as I'm aware there isn't any further danger.




    A female local voices her concerns.​





    LOCAL 2


    There have been some strange occurences following the capture of these Terrorists. The damage to the Town Theatre and a Delorean Wreck found near Hill Dale, which has involved a vehicle of the same make. Could there be a link?




    The Mayor hesitates. His son intervenes.​





    WILSON II


    That's a theory by the way. And one of them came from a bitter former Mayor.




    A male local voice is heard.​





    LOCAL 3 (O.S).


    Could these arrests be linked to stolen Plutonium and a Libyan Terrorist Group?




    Mayor Wilson holds his hands up.​





    MAYOR


    The FBI are not speaking on the matter. That's the only update I have.





    LOCAL 3


    Witnesses near Hill Dale think a link to be that of male dressed as a Cowboy. Is this male dangerous?





    MAYOR


    I have not been able to dwell on that. The only update I can assure you on, is not to panic.




    The people continue to call out.​





    WILSON II


    Please. My father has given all the information he can. We will keep you updated in due course. Our next meeting will commence a week today. Thank you for coming.




    The crowd continue to call out to their mayor. The meeting concludes. The Mayor and his son proceed to leave the


    meeting room.





    INT. RONALD HARRIS.​




    Ronald Harris appears amongst the Crowd.





    There is no sign of Doc Brown.





    INT. NOTE.



    He appears to be holding a note in his hand. The Wilsons approach. Ronald glances at the note momentarily.


    It appears his about to hand the note over, but instead, places it in his pocket. He intercepts the Mayor.




    RONALD


    Mr Mayor, there's some information I'd like to share with you.





    MAYOR


    If you call my office, we could set up a meeting.





    RONALD


    It concerns Doctor Emmett Brown and a potential catastrophic event that could happen today.




    Mayor Wilson and Wilson II look at each other concerned.​





    MAYOR


    Where did you get this information from?





    RONALD


    From the source himself. He has the Plutonium. I think he's built a Nuclear Bomb.




    The Mayor and his son look terrified.​





    WILSON II


    Where is he now?







    EXT. CLOCKTOWER





    The Clock remains at 10:04 PM.





    THE CAMERA PANS DOWN TO GROUND LEVEL.​




    EXT. DOC BROWN.





    Doc exits the Courthouse, with the Briefcase, containing the Plutonium. He proceeds to head back to the Delorean in the Alley. He stops in his tracks, when he spots somebody else in the Delorean with Marty and Linda.





    INT. DELOREAN TIME MACHINE.​




    INT. MARTY MCFLY.





    INT. LINDA MCFLY





    INT. LORRAINE BAINES MCFLY



    INT. EINSTEIN





    Lorraine feels intrigued by the car and is sat behind the wheel.​





    LORRAINE


    This feels really cozy. I guess some folk exaggerate.


    (She then spots a lever to her right)


    What's this do?




    She turns the lever and the Time Circuits come on and the Fluxcipacitor Light comes on.​





    There are three dates on the Time Circuits.




    DESTINATION: Monday October 28 1985 3:00 am.





    CURRENT TIME: Monday October 28 1985 09:15 am.





    LAST TIME DEPARTED: Monday October 26 2015 03:00 am.​





    LORRAINE


    Wow. What's this?




    Marty and Linda act silly and shrug their shoulders.​





    MARTY


    Oh you know....




    EXT. TOWN SQUARE.





    EXT. DOC BROWN.





    Doc is beside himself and doesn't know what to do. He retreats.​




    EXT. POLICE OFFICER.





    A Police Officer appears pointing a Pistol at Doc.​





    OFFICER


    Hold it right there Doctor Brown.





    DOC


    Great Scott.




    INT. DELOREAN.





    Einstein barks. Marty and Linda wonder what Einstein is barking at. Lorraine jumps.




    MARTY


    What is it Einie?




    Einstein squeels as he stares out of the window. Marty to look where Einstein is barking to.


    Marty sees Doc being apprehended by the Police.




    DOC


    Holy Shit.




    Linda panics.​





    LINDA


    What's wrong?





    MARTY


    He's being arrested.





    LINDA


    Who? Who?





    MARTY


    Who do you think?! Doc!




    EXT. DOC.


    Doc lowers the Plutonium Case cautiously, as the cop moves in.





    INT. LINDA.​




    She looks dumfounded.​





    LINDA


    Perfect. Just Perfect.




    Linda turns to Lorraine.​





    LINDA


    Uh, Grandm - I mean Lorraine. We have to go now.





    LORRAINE


    Why are they arresting your Uncle Calvin?





    MARTY


    Beats the shit out of me.


    LINDA


    Oh no this can't be happening. THIS CAN'T BE HAPPENING!


    (distraught)





    MARTY


    I'm afraid it is happening sweetheart. All of it.




    Lorraine is confused by the events.​




    Doc is seen turning around and getting down on his knees. He looks prolongingly at Marty and Marty looks prolonged at Doc distraught.​





    MARTY


    We gotta stop e'm. Our future depends on saving your mother and my sister.




    Marty tries to get the Gullwing door open, but it's stuck. Linda pulls on her Dad's arm and he shouts at him.​





    LINDA


    Dad are you crazy?!





    LORRAINE


    What's going on?




    Einstein barks.





    EXT. MAYOR GOLDIE WILSON.​




    EXT. GOLDIE WILSON II.





    The mayor and his son witness the arrest of Doc. As do other members of the Community.





    EXT. RONALD HARRIS.​




    Ronald Harris exits the Courthouse with an evil smile.





    EXT. POLICE OFFICER.


    As the Officer moves in to arrest Doc, he can hear a commotion and a dark barking. Doc sees that Marty is trying to get out of the Delorean in attempt to stop the arrest. Doc worries that Marty could potentially make events worse.​





    DOC


    No Marty. Get out of here!




    Lorraine spots Doc calling out to Marty. Linda points to Doc.​





    LINDA


    Dad look.





    DOC


    Marty get you and Linda out of here!





    MARTY


    No. I can't let that happen!




    The officer scours to where Doc is looking and he spots the Delorean.​





    OFFICER


    That your Getaway vehicle Brown?....A Delorean.




    Marty and Linda look at each other realizing they've been spotted and they turn to Lorraine.​





    MARTY AND LINDA TOGETHER


    GET US OUT OF HERE!




































     
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