Discussion in 'Dallas Writers Room' started by Karin Schill, Sep 13, 2016.
Thanks so much @Karin Schill
AN HOUR WITH SUE ELLEN
My one shot take on what should have happened when Bobby knocked on the door in Season 9’s episode Olio. I still scream at Bobby for ruining their kiss.
Dedicated to Sarah @Sarah
JR and Sue Ellen gazed into each other's eyes inching closer to share a sensual kiss; they turned when they heard the knock on JR’s bedroom door.
"Excuse me, I'd like to talk to JR for a minute," Bobby said.
Sue Ellen smiled and said, "Of course," with a slight reservation.
"Alone," Bobby insisted.
"Hold on, Bobby. Don't leave, Sue Ellen. Be right back," JR said. He walked Bobby into the hallway.
"I wanted to talk in your room, JR and…"
"I'll talk to you all night but can you spare me an hour alone with my wife?"
"JR, after what you put the family through, you owe me time to…"
JR got in his face. "Hey, listen, I owe Sue Ellen my time first. During this Calhoun fiasco, we've been closer than we'd ever been in a long time. I have another chance with my wife, and you just messed up a tender moment between us. I know it may seem like only a kiss, but you never experienced a kiss from Sue Ellen. Mm, she has the sweetest lips in the world. I won't allow you to ruin something as simple as that for me. One hour!" JR said and left Bobby speechless.
JR walked back in and closed the door. Sue Ellen had a smirk on her face. "What's that look for darlin?" JR asked.
Sue Ellen walked slowly up to him. She placed her hands on his chest and asked, "Do you intend to kiss my lips for an hour, my darlin?"
“Oh, you heard me,” JR said, with a chuckle. His arms wrapped around her waist. She said, “Eavesdropped and I loved it, but I melted when you told me not to leave.”
“Well, you said it was up to me to make things better between us. I intend to,” JR said.
“Slowly,” Sue Ellen whispered, her finger outlined his lips.
They looked into each other’s eyes and tenderly kissed, their tongues knotted as they savored the taste. JR’s hands began to undo the buttons on Sue Ellen’s silky blouse. She reached for the knot in his tie to loosen it. Their lips parted to undress each other; clad only in their underwear. It seemed like forever that they had last made love. Neither JR nor Sue Ellen wanted to rush; rather they wanted to savor the moment.
Sue Ellen turned down the bed-covers. They stood there; pent up desire building between them. Their hands explored, caressed and lightly squeezed until JR gently turned Sue Ellen around to remove her bra. She let out a soft moan when he kissed the nape of her neck, as his hands reached under and fondled her breasts. He eased Sue Ellen onto the bed in a sitting position. He stood in front. Sue Ellen placed her legs on his chest. He planted kisses on her toes and slowly pulled off her thong panty. JR lowered his underwear with Sue Ellen’s helping hands and lay down next to her. He caressed the inner part of her thigh and said, “I love you, Sue Ellen. I want you so much.”
“Oh JR, I’ve waited so long for you,” Sue Ellen said, in a whisper soft voice.
JR took Sue Ellen in his arms. He paced their lovemaking, taking his time so they could savor in the intimate pleasure they gave each other. It was tender, passionate, and loving. It was JR. It was Sue Ellen. They were so much in love. It was a love that they shared forever.
Thank you so much dear friend for dedicated this to me. As you know I've been having a rough time, and I deeply appreciate the dedication and thoughts.
Really beautiful story and how it should have been!
Thank you, Sarah. Love ya
Love you too. And thanks again.
Why couldn't those bloody writers have thought the way you do. This was awesome.
Great one shot @Crazy For Sue Ellen
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